A Tossed Love Potion

A Tossed Love Potion

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I remember the pain

of that day;

so today,

I’ll capture that

piece of my heart

and place it in

a glass jar.

Bonjour!


Plus comme bon voyage...


Here on the shore,

I toss the memories

into the sea,

so that they’ll

never be

dealt, felt, or smelt

ever again…

Just one with

the wicked ocean.




© 2015 sinNsincerity



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I didn't know you know French!!! Ah, you and I are alike in this, I usually gather memories in boxes and gently set them free into the sea (literally!). Though probably all in my head, I feel a heavy weight lift off my shoulders. A new beginning commences. Adieu et bon voyage indeed to yesterdays!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Just a tad bit here and there.
That is so awesome! I have only done that once, but there are .. read more
Bukky.O

6 Months Ago

amazing!!!


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Catchy, Creative, Cute. Great work!

Posted 2 Months Ago


This poem flows very nicely, and I love the imagery that you evoke with your diction. The concept of using the ocean as a metaphor for "moving on" in life was clever and unique. Can't wait to read some of your other work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Releasing the feelings and emotions is the most freeing thing. You've captured this here

Posted 4 Months Ago


I really like this. I like the certainty of your choice in how to deal with the pain. Close that door & open a new one.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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couldn't stop reading it because it's so simple yet so emotional and i could really relate

Posted 6 Months Ago


This is simple and heart felt! Love it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


I appreciate this kinds of poems. Out of pure emotion and wanting to escape from reality. This is one of the good ones. Keep writing. ;)

Posted 6 Months Ago


love the straight forward language and form ... bing bam boom .. into the wicked ocean it goes .. love it! what an empowering jar for the hurt and hurting .. really like this one ...tucking it away for any future needs ;)
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tender, passionate, beautiful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Really enjoyed this. If only it were that easy to get rid of unwanted/painful memories and feelings. Wonderful write!

Posted 6 Months Ago



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sinNsincerity
sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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