Hershey's Kiss and Bliss

Oh,

how I miss…

Yes, 

you know this…

Ms. Villain!

The times when

you would place

a Hershey’s Kiss

within the banks

of your voluptuous

lips 

and how we

would kiss

till…

it no longer

existed!

Reviews

[Kelsey Rogers]

When I was reading this I pictured you singing this to a rock beat in an off-key tone in front of a crowd of drunk friends. Made me chuckle.

[sinNsincerity]

That would be so horrible because I couldn't sing to save my life hahah
Thank you Kelsey!

[Emily]

Nice wording!!
Well done!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks Emily!

[Tanya]

Wonderful! What better way to kiss, then with a little Hershey's in the middle. You have a great talent, and I'm sure a very creative mind, as well. Keep it up.

[sinNsincerity]

I appreciate it dearly Tanya! Thank you!

[Tanya]

Your welcome.

[Frozen Eyes]

A kiss not tasted is a kiss wasted.. Kudos to the playful thought & the urge of love u display :)

[sinNsincerity]

Not wasted at all, just something I used to do with an Ex...

[Ruth]

Playful piece...gentle tease...smiled with ease :)

[sinNsincerity]

hehe Thank you Ruth! =D

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

I loved the playful nature of this, my first thought was sweetness and youthful love, my second was ... that sounds like a messy sticky good time ;) really digging the simple and flawless flow of this speaks of summer love and innocence

[sinNsincerity]

Oh I will tell you- it was not so innocent... hehe
But there was sweetness and youthful love involved.
Thank you so much for reading Crystal.

[dan]

A write that is both bountiful in joyous verve but seemingly incomplete. An ending that seems a bit too abrupt. Good writing but I feel as if I need to know a bit more. A nice piece. take care...dan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Dan, I'm a tease like that. I can't give it all away at once...

[Maja]

I really enjoyed how playful but at the same time sensual this poem was. Now I want to get some Hershey's.. :)) Just a suggestion though, I think Hershey's Kiss will do just fine as the title, but well it's your poem. Great job! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it Maja!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I like strawberry kisses, but I'm fond of every sweet thing, so I am bit prejudiced after all. Thank you for sharing this inspiring words, will try them out for sure. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

I never had or seen the strawberry ones. They sound delicious.
Thank you Rudi!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

My pleasure. :)