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A Poem by sinNsincerity

She Was On The Earth Side 


I Was On The Water Side, 

Together We Made Mud…

© 2016 sinNsincerity



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Hmm... So few words, yet so deep. But only if one takes the time to think about it.

Water + Earth = Mud
A simple concept, one most children would know. However, what are the implications of this simple concept?

The biggest thing that comes to mind, is the mud house. Which may still be used today (I don't know.) Either way, one of the first types of shelter. Which, as I go deeper, brings me to something else...

Because of the implication of a romantic relationship, I can see a metaphor, one of the shelter and security a pair of loving parents (Earth + Water) to a child (Mud) Similar to the security and shelter of a mud house.

Of course, I could be overthinking and overanalyzing, as I am apt to do. But it is fun to attempt to dig deep into the words, and find the true meaning. Which can be done with few given words, as I have just done.

I am only able to do this because there is a good amount of hidden meanings int= the few words given. So I applaud you. You are quite the wordsmith.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

It was true, we no longer date, but everything I write is or has been true at a point...at least fro.. read more
Andrew Ballard

2 Years Ago

That is a very interesting and nice way to find inspiration for writing. Especially poetry. Commenda.. read more
sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for that.
I usually write about things after they pass and I gave them some.. read more



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Very deep. Sort put yet so sweet. Powerful with little words very nice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Like Splenda...
Lord of Madmen

1 Year Ago

Lol i guess so.
I'll never think of water and mud the same way again. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

hehe that's awesome
So simple yet so beautiful. So few words, yet it could have so many interpretations: "Together We Made Mud..." especially this line. I love poems like this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Yes, very much so.
I try may best to leave open interpretations, so that other may open thems.. read more
Alice Poésy

1 Year Ago

I love open interpretations; everyone can find themselves in them. You're doing it right, I loved th.. read more
sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

They most certainly can if they desire to travel far and deep enough.
Thank you, I highly app.. read more
Virgo and Cancer can make a good match actually (sorry, I did read about you mentioning your zodiac sign)! Virgos need to be watered so they can become more relaxed and affectionate, which cancer can most certainly provide. And mud can be quite pleasant for the both of them--sticky but pleasant in feeling, down-to-earth but sensual.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Yes, I thought it would be a real cool way to say exactly what you've stated and so much more if one.. read more
i like the simple choices of words here. great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you Edis!
Aaahhhh......beautiful.....just reminded me that I have a poem somewhere about an ampersand.....:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope sig.. read more
lololol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo quirky and cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading Hazara.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of u.. read more
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Throw in a little straw and you got yourself a Cob house here ...a home for the heart :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

Most definitely a home for the heart. =D
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence o.. read more
Okay...I can read this in two ways...either that you made a mess out of it, or that you created mud which is healing and fertile and something which can be moulded into so many other things. So,which one is it? But then, I guess there is no concrete answer as love is both these side- the mess as well as the magic :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope signs. She's a Virgo .. read more
Isabel25

2 Years Ago

Cool..I love your concept :)
haha, I really like this. I'm not sure if the reaction you are after is a laugh, but that was mine

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Years Ago

The only this I seek is your satisfaction and I am more that glad it could make you laugh!
Th.. read more

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