God in the Ninth Inning

God in the Ninth Inning

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Women think deep!

Who do you think taught me?

Who do you think inspired this poetry?

Who do you think?

Quite insistent.

Smell the incense?

White M@gik!

But deeper I go;

Quite subliminal...

Because lately,

Mrs. 7even-6ix  has forgotten about me.

She was digging me...

The horned mermaid left me at sea.

My Capricornuns Mistress.

Showing and taking it all in a blink.

3rd 3y3ed sacrifice.

Exposing me,

So I can view her compositions.

Feeling the feelings,

But the honesty of humanity

Has told me

F**K YOUR FEELINGS!

Quite insistent.

So I read in the lines-

In between my mind

In between my honesty

In between...

But please,

Please,

Get out of me.



© 2016 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
Abracadabara
I create as I speak



Battle-Star-Galactica Heart/Love,
Novela,
Gothspel-Poetry,
Done-with-Secular-Poerty,
Are-U-Still-Down,
Magik

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i definitely enjoyed this.

with the first line "women think deep!" i can interpret this two ways, which make the following parts have different meanings. it's either a plea for women to think deep or a statement that deep thinking is what women do. i'm not sure if you intended this as ambiguous but my first read-through was the interpretation that it's a plea for women to think deep about why you write poetry, and the answer is because of another woman. haha. i can, sadly, relate. haha.

i laughed pretty hard at the "F**K YOUR FEELINGS" part because i didn't expect to read that so boldly, but i definitely see the truth of how 'humanity' tells guys to interpret women's feelings. i like the word play in the next few lines about 'reading between.' i really like the creativity you got here. damn good!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Well personally, women are the closest thing to God, so I worship them as well... Every women I have.. read more



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Ha... you are very clever.

Extremely clever. I enjoyed that quite a bit.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Nice nice nice
Absolutely love the transition of this piece. The way it flows into each emotion and then begging at the end... I am amazed at your ease of writing with this. Please keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed those transitions because it's something I've been trying to master. Not quite .. read more
Adorkable Neko

1 Year Ago

Keep it up, practice makes perfect!
I really love this piece, reminds me of Third Eye Blind back in the day for some reason. Well done!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you did Phoenix. Hehe high school bands were so cool. Miss those daze.
Your style reminds me of a poet friend I once knew. I'm as mesmerized with your style as I was his. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Maybe I should take it up a notch eh...
Cool way to express that^-^

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Glad you feel so.
Pink Pastel

1 Year Ago

Yup sin^-^
well you hit all the notes,an a + for u

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sir Ron!
I love this. Nice work!! Keep it up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Always....
It's got a definite male frustrated edge to it. I understand. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Quite interesting... the frustration might be coming from masculine and feminine angles, but there's.. read more
Oh damn cool! :) Smiling, brilliant hon, some of this imagery is totally surreal and epic :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ruth, I'm still trying to tap into that magik that will just be too much for some to compr.. read more
Good stuff my California friend:)
The numbers and symbols are a cool touch.
I hope all is well, b-blessed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you James, how's life in the Rockies?

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