God in the Ninth Inning

God in the Ninth Inning

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Women think deep!

Who do you think taught me?

Who do you think inspired this poetry?

Who do you think?

Quite insistent.

Smell the incense?

White M@gik!

But deeper I go;

Quite subliminal...

Because lately,

Mrs. 7even-6ix  has forgotten about me.

She was digging me...

The horned mermaid left me at sea.

My Capricornuns Mistress.

Showing and taking it all in a blink.

3rd 3y3ed sacrifice.

Exposing me,

So I can view her compositions.

Feeling the feelings,

But the honesty of humanity

Has told me

F**K YOUR FEELINGS!

Quite insistent.

So I read in the lines-

In between my mind

In between my honesty

In between...

But please,

Please,

Get out of me.



© 2016 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
Abracadabara
I create as I speak



Battle-Star-Galactica Heart/Love,
Novela,
Gothspel-Poetry,
Done-with-Secular-Poerty,
Are-U-Still-Down,
Magik

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

i definitely enjoyed this.

with the first line "women think deep!" i can interpret this two ways, which make the following parts have different meanings. it's either a plea for women to think deep or a statement that deep thinking is what women do. i'm not sure if you intended this as ambiguous but my first read-through was the interpretation that it's a plea for women to think deep about why you write poetry, and the answer is because of another woman. haha. i can, sadly, relate. haha.

i laughed pretty hard at the "F**K YOUR FEELINGS" part because i didn't expect to read that so boldly, but i definitely see the truth of how 'humanity' tells guys to interpret women's feelings. i like the word play in the next few lines about 'reading between.' i really like the creativity you got here. damn good!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Well personally, women are the closest thing to God, so I worship them as well... Every women I have.. read more


WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.

Reviews

Ha... you are very clever.

Extremely clever. I enjoyed that quite a bit.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Nice nice nice
Absolutely love the transition of this piece. The way it flows into each emotion and then begging at the end... I am amazed at your ease of writing with this. Please keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed those transitions because it's something I've been trying to master. Not quite .. read more
Adorkable Neko

1 Year Ago

Keep it up, practice makes perfect!
I really love this piece, reminds me of Third Eye Blind back in the day for some reason. Well done!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you did Phoenix. Hehe high school bands were so cool. Miss those daze.
Your style reminds me of a poet friend I once knew. I'm as mesmerized with your style as I was his. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Maybe I should take it up a notch eh...
Cool way to express that^-^

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Glad you feel so.
Pink Pastel

1 Year Ago

Yup sin^-^
well you hit all the notes,an a + for u

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sir Ron!
I love this. Nice work!! Keep it up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Always....
It's got a definite male frustrated edge to it. I understand. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Quite interesting... the frustration might be coming from masculine and feminine angles, but there's.. read more
Oh damn cool! :) Smiling, brilliant hon, some of this imagery is totally surreal and epic :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ruth, I'm still trying to tap into that magik that will just be too much for some to compr.. read more
Good stuff my California friend:)
The numbers and symbols are a cool touch.
I hope all is well, b-blessed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you James, how's life in the Rockies?

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

841 Views
22 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on August 4, 2016
Last Updated on August 4, 2016

Author

sinNsincerity
sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



About
Please support me on Pay Pal for the art/poetry I create for your enjoyment. This is my attempt to remain independent and to avoid the mainstream publishing companies who do not care about the art. .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..