Give Me End

The one who says she really loves me,

Is the one I can't have yet.

And she knows this.

Polarity is frozen.

Yet; Love is my target,

So allow me to zone in.

But is there another way to love you?

Is there?

Let me share 'em with you,

I'm who.

Who?

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Call me Mr. Marlboro,

But I'm your toy

#Hasbro

Ouija?

No-

Just  Wicca-

Pedia mind.

But please take the time

To undefine the bottom line.

Do you mind if I incline

You the opportunity to just mind?

Ajar, I'll leave your heart at far...

But so far...

My poetry is leading me further away from she,

So it's hard to love anyone

'Till I'm DONE

Author's Note

Gothspel

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Wow like how you state the narrator know she loves him but he can don't have her till he is down which make him wish to write more so it takes I'm further from bwing done and from her. This is very powerful. He wishes to love her but only knows of one way. That way he know just can not be done for some reason unknown to the reader. He wishes to find a different way for the love he has is forbade by that reason. It is a iner struggle between ones desires and what one can have. He wishestablished to love her but doestrogen not know how. So you both yore for each other but something or someone is keeping you apart. And you wish for that to end which means time is standing in your way. But you can wait but you do not wish to wait. I to know this feeling it has past now I may love the one I crave but that's because time passed. So you to will be able to love the one who you so dearly love if you have not already. I love how you used words that have a deep feel to them. This was a wonderful read. I loved it so much. Keep on working to gain your love and writing. Thank you for sharing!

[sinNsincerity]

It is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. The woman I speak on, we have been knowing each other for eight years now, but we both know we are soul mates. Just patiently waiting for the timing to be right.
Your analysis was dead on.

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece:)
Powerful wording that oozes with emotion,
all in due time when you find the one that you will
have the opportunity to love they way your heart desires,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you bro, It's all 1 2 3.

[Emily]

Loved it!
Keep on writing!!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did Emily

[James]

This was really great, it reads like a rap, maybe it's supposed to, but it goes way deeper than that. This was fun and meaningful.

[sinNsincerity]

I don't intend for it to read like a rap. I just use a lot of writing techniques I have learned in school and old writers, and learning how to merge specific things together with no-hold-bars...
It is much deeper, and I'm getting closer

[Madi Bellon]

"Call me Mr. Marlboro" is such a fun and unique line. I love it.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you thought so Madi!

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

"Polarity is frozen.
Yet; Love is my target,
So allow me to zone in." Chilling..... beautiful.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I do my best to ignite thoughts from several angles.

[Pink Pastel]

Is this a rap?
Because it was awesomely great

[sinNsincerity]

Oh no, I just been writing in phases, so it gives It a faster pace.

[Pink Pastel]

Oh okay but still cool^-^

[Ana B.]

ah damn, i can only sigh at the beauty of this.....amazing dear poet :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Ana, aways such a pleasure to hear from you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice journey in your words. Took reader to many places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, the mind is a beautiful thing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.

[AmandaFuller]

Great work.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Amanda.

[AmandaFuller]

No problem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

That look of realization when one perceives that lust and love, not two to be mixed or desired with confusion, well done, good read.

[sinNsincerity]

It's all that and some, which is yet to be discovered...