Give Me End

Give Me End

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The one who says she really loves me,

Is the one I can't have yet.

And she knows this.

Polarity is frozen.

Yet; Love is my target,

So allow me to zone in.

But is there another way to love you?

Is there?

Let me share 'em with you,

I'm who.

Who?

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Call me Mr. Marlboro,

But I'm your toy

#Hasbro

Ouija?

No-

Just  Wicca-

Pedia mind.

But please take the time

To undefine the bottom line.

Do you mind if I incline

You the opportunity to just mind?

Ajar, I'll leave your heart at far...

But so far...

My poetry is leading me further away from she,

So it's hard to love anyone

'Till I'm DONE



© 2016 sinNsincerity



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sinNsincerity
Gothspel

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Wow like how you state the narrator know she loves him but he can don't have her till he is down which make him wish to write more so it takes I'm further from bwing done and from her. This is very powerful. He wishes to love her but only knows of one way. That way he know just can not be done for some reason unknown to the reader. He wishes to find a different way for the love he has is forbade by that reason. It is a iner struggle between ones desires and what one can have. He wishestablished to love her but doestrogen not know how. So you both yore for each other but something or someone is keeping you apart. And you wish for that to end which means time is standing in your way. But you can wait but you do not wish to wait. I to know this feeling it has past now I may love the one I crave but that's because time passed. So you to will be able to love the one who you so dearly love if you have not already. I love how you used words that have a deep feel to them. This was a wonderful read. I loved it so much. Keep on working to gain your love and writing. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

It is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. T.. read more



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Another fantastic piece:)
Powerful wording that oozes with emotion,
all in due time when you find the one that you will
have the opportunity to love they way your heart desires,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you bro, It's all 1 2 3.
Loved it!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you did Emily
This was really great, it reads like a rap, maybe it's supposed to, but it goes way deeper than that. This was fun and meaningful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I don't intend for it to read like a rap. I just use a lot of writing techniques I have learned in s.. read more
"Call me Mr. Marlboro" is such a fun and unique line. I love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I'm glad that you thought so Madi!
"Polarity is frozen.
Yet; Love is my target,
So allow me to zone in." Chilling..... beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, I do my best to ignite thoughts from several angles.
Is this a rap?
Because it was awesomely great

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Oh no, I just been writing in phases, so it gives It a faster pace.
Pink Pastel

1 Year Ago

Oh okay but still cool^-^
ah damn, i can only sigh at the beauty of this.....amazing dear poet :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Ana, aways such a pleasure to hear from you.
Nice journey in your words. Took reader to many places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you, the mind is a beautiful thing.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I agree and you are welcome.
Great work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Amanda.
AmandaFuller

1 Year Ago

No problem.
That look of realization when one perceives that lust and love, not two to be mixed or desired with confusion, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

It's all that and some, which is yet to be discovered...

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