Heart Arrest

Heart Arrest

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I have wandering eyes,

A wandering soul,

I wonder where to start?

Of all the days,

Please don't walk away...

Just go!

My SiN is a cent.

Sent within this

Piggy bank of a heart.

Here goes a kiss...

Not hell bent,

But we resist the heaven sent.

Take a sip,

Can you taste it?

Let me wipe my lips.

I love your hips.

Pardon my lisp,

But it's quite obvious

That I'm vomiting this s**t.

More like magik!

More organized -

Sex never circumcised

Because we run it all night.

Come to the other side.

The darkside.

This is where my mind rest.

A penny for your thought?

Does that make sense?

And I'm getting nice,

Quite precise.

I'm 9th.

Did you wander?

'Cause I'm your wonder.

I've paid for this weight

That lays beneath your gaze.

The image of your soul dwells and swells...

Hard not soft.

Fall in love.

I'll be your rock bottom.

Please, let me catch you.

Trap___

But it's a secret,

And I can keep it.

Never have to lie,

Never public,

Never forcing the passion

Because there's never a doubt.

This is seduction.

Spill something.

Are you drunk yet?

Because this climax has you erected,

When staring at your reflection.

Are you feeling something?

I'll say it again...

This is seduction.

A comfortable stew,

A comfortable mood,

A comfortable view.

Let me not confuse you,

I want to peruse you,

I don't want to bruise,

Use,

Or lose you...

© 2018 sinNsincerity


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sinNsincerity
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Reading this I struggled to decide if I liked the way it read. I'd lose myself in your flow and rhythm and then it would change. Then I'd pick up another pace all for it to change again. And then I realised that is what I love about this. And you never set the pace in the same way which was wonderful. So more than just saying how beautiful this is, I'd say that your delivery is just as enchanting as the story.
(i liked reading aloud even more than in my head)

Thanks for sharing!
J

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

That's pretty awesome to hear, I wrote that opening line to foreshadow just that as the stream of co.. read more
Jenny

7 Years Ago

deep thinking!
i like that you put so much thought and effort into not only your work but the.. read more



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Your pieces have a certain mix of flow and depth that I can say I'm glad I've discovered. Awesome work, brother.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thanks man, I appreciate that. It's Kinda like a house of mirrors...
Your stuff is dead a*s n.. read more
I really like this poem. Beautiful texture and interweaving of thoughts and emotions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you Annie, I enjoy your blog btw.
gentlekindness

7 Years Ago

Your welcome. Looking forward to reading more.
Another great piece my friend,
I could definitely feel the emotion and deep desire within
the words, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thanks brother, stay blessed.
Simple and without pretense, a most telling piece that guides one to follow emotion within the context of frailty, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you thought so Thomas.
Hi a cleverly emotional poem about the way you will love someone. It's easy to read and I found if flowed nicely.

Blessing

El

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking so Elmarie!
Wow, such an interesting piece! Really like the intensity behind it. Very nicely written. Great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you'd enjoyed it Nina.
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Well, first one of yours I've read. Kinda have to get used to your style. As for this write, it was intriguing to say the least. Very well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

No worries, I can't even get used to it. It's always morphing.
D

7 Years Ago

Well, that's great, because the possibilities are endless (:
This is such an intriguing poem and it pulls readers along.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking so!
lots of quotes put into a poem,creative

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you for thinking so Sir Ron!
"I'll be your rock bottom." I really like this...it's so intensive, yet softly served. Interesting.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, yea, that line is killer isn't it?

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