Daphne

Daphne

A Poem by sinNsincerity

You are my

Poetree.

Each story holds its leaf,

But deeper I go

Cause I wanna see your roots.

Cocooning in your trunk...

Allow us to grow from within.

Drenched with your nectar,

Pour me a shot.

Save me a minute; rather,

I want to lay in it,

So there's no need for olive oil baths.

The discovery of your tomb has

Fed my hunger of the fruit of your womb.

Fruit of my woman,

Woven and dancing within my soul.

Grant me a taste...

Can you see the bruise that was

Laid upon my chest?

Underneath the branch is where my heart sings.

The poisoness of my days...

Spring in my face.


© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
Gothpel
Calling on the Muses
Let me Worship yoU

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Wow, very poetic. Love your choice of words and how you weaved them. I like that you avoid filler words and have an immense amount of meaning in your context.

My favorite line: "Can you see the bruise that was
Laid upon my chest?
Underneath the branch is where my heart sings." Well done, I'll be reading more of your work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, I'm more than glad that you enjoyed it! Take care and have a great day.
DDee

1 Month Ago

I totally agree with the above review, couldn't had written it better myself



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Wow, i like this, very strong words

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Kylie, it's my pleasure!
I've read this a few times. I just wanted to truly absorb it before commenting.
The sincerety, passion, and tenderness in this piece is endearing...
Perfect rhythm and feel conveyed.
Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for taking your time with it Anastasia, I pit a lot into it.
Good and well done.
Expressive and experimental

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Rubein.
I really enjoyed this. It reads and lingers well.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Kelly.
Wow, very poetic. Love your choice of words and how you weaved them. I like that you avoid filler words and have an immense amount of meaning in your context.

My favorite line: "Can you see the bruise that was
Laid upon my chest?
Underneath the branch is where my heart sings." Well done, I'll be reading more of your work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, I'm more than glad that you enjoyed it! Take care and have a great day.
DDee

1 Month Ago

I totally agree with the above review, couldn't had written it better myself
I read a bunch of your poems today. You are a unique writer with interesting color and dynamics in your diction. This is a good example of that.

Nice work Sir.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Why thank you Relic, I really appreciate that.
Very beautiful, elegant and classy. I love the reference to the plight of Daphne and her fight for perpetual virginity from a shot of lead.

Apollo and Daphne is an interesting way to convey the interest and wild desire of someone virginal, pure and although there, they are rather unattainable.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Thank you Harlotte, I have been reading a lot of Greek and Roman Lit as of late and just thought it'.. read more
''Allow us to grow from within. '' damn, but that hit to close to home. Lovely write dear David, the last 5 lines are sheer perfection, both sense and style.

Your fan,
Ana.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Months Ago

Did it really?
Thank you so much Ana, I highly appreciate that and I'm so glad that you enjo.. read more
You write about desire so elegantly. Thank you for sharing, God Bless.

Sheer Terror

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Months Ago

Thank you S.T, I do my best. God bless you as well!
The muse makes your wanderings quite poetic and romantic. I can feel the beginning of spring everywhere here, not only in your poem, on this page in general, the emotions are getting lighter and jump around in their brightened state calling for love.
"But deeper I go cause I wanna see your roots", how very relatable. There's no true worship without depth. The muse is the keeper of such and a proper lover. I like how you've woven the soft words into your modern style.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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sinNsincerity

7 Months Ago

They speak to me in many ways and keep me driven.
I'm glad that you like it Vanessa. I'm alwa.. read more
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7 Months Ago

That's a good attitude. You're welcome.

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