Daphne

You are my

Poetree.

Each story holds its leaf,

But deeper I go

Cause I wanna see your roots.

Cocooning in your trunk...

Allow us to grow from within.

Drenched with your nectar,

Pour me a shot.

Save me a minute; rather,

I want to lay in it,

So there's no need for olive oil baths.

The discovery of your tomb has

Fed my hunger of the fruit of your womb.

Fruit of my woman,

Fruit of my Moon,

Woven and dancing within my soul.

Grant me a taste...

Can you see the craters that were

Bruised upon my chest?

Underneath the branch is where my heart rest.

The poisoness of my days...

Spring in my face.

Author's Note

Gothpel
Calling on the Muses
Let me Worship yoU

Reviews

[Kittenincake]

Wow, very poetic. Love your choice of words and how you weaved them. I like that you avoid filler words and have an immense amount of meaning in your context.

My favorite line: "Can you see the bruise that was
Laid upon my chest?
Underneath the branch is where my heart sings." Well done, I'll be reading more of your work.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I'm more than glad that you enjoyed it! Take care and have a great day.

[MoonChild]

I totally agree with the above review, couldn't had written it better myself

[wordman]

a deep and passionate write sin you want you need to take all of her into your soul

[Valentine]

Some times we have to dig deep into our inner selves to be able to express our feelings on paper. Valentine

[Tabby Mac]

Clever play on words I will say first. I'm probably reading a lot into this piece but I enjoyed the representation of the 'poetree' how the leaves are poems past, but deeper you go almost into yourself to find why the love didn't last in a deep love encounter. Longing once again to rekindle or find a love that was so Devine.
I found the words beautifully put together. Well done!
Tabby

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Tabby, I really loved you analyses of it!
I always love hearing your thoughts and perspective. They are much appreciated!

[yuhee]

And I thought of Apollo on a split second. Nice piece of work btw

[LapseOfMind]

Very nicely done, another work of art. Great job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks Mind