Her Vail

Her Vail

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The moon calls down to me.

Your Majesty.

Are you mad at me?

What's the cause for this summoning?

She has done more than

Swept me off my feet.

A Love catastrophe,

But not a travesty.

What a feat...

She lures the water from within.

Outer-body.

I'm out of my body.

Are you the existence of my sin?

The 9 over my 6.

~Astrology~

Astromancer.

My Cancer.

Two Crescents,

But is it you

That'll make me full?

So I close my eyes

To see if I'm alive.

I need you to reply!

Do I need to die

To find the truth that

Lies in your lies?

My most pleasant high.

Hard to believe in

That you are hard to believe in.

The reason why my heart is bleeding.

I have a need for more,

But I don't need you anymore.

War in

Days of

Yesterdays.

You left me far behind the sun's rays.



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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I identify with so many aspects of this. It seems to be uniquely crafted. (I read quite a bit on in the site. More often than not, if I have no constructive criticism, or praise then, I don't leave a review at all)
This was a nice change of pase for me. I found the twists within such a short amount of writing, impressive and refreshing. There is a other worldly romance, mixed with a bit of a seductive tango. In the small amount of lines used, the imagery was conveyed vividly and beautifully. Personally, I feel like that is what your standard poetry is about. Conveying and demonstrating as much feeling as possible through the use of carefully orchestrated phrases.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
♤BE♤

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Days Ago

'Twas my pleasure Barefoot Empress.



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I love this so much! No fluff, each word, each line carries meaning. Beautiful flow

Posted 1 Year Ago


Are you the existence of my sin is so eye catchingly phenomenal

Posted 1 Year Ago


this poem is really nice. i love it

Posted 1 Year Ago


"Hard to believe in
That you are hard to believe in.
The reason why my heart is bleeding.
I have a need for more,
But I don't need you anymore.
War in
Days of
Yesterdays.
You left me far behind the sun's rays."
My favourite part of the poem. Beautifully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

place it in your heart 4 me
Adorable, l love the way you express your emotions it's pretty good poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

My exes press me
Beautiful. I like how the emotions flows from one word to another. Just beautiful. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

I'm glad that you did, and thank you!
stream of thought associations raising conflicted thought and emotion ..what loftier comedy than love to be able to summon such confusion ;) i looked up the definition of Vale to be sure ... vale, veil, vail ... such an array .. what a heart break in closing ..hope your hero survives to love again :{
E.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

I Hope i do as Wellllll
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Ari
I absolutely adore the first three lines and the last line. Very well written... just beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Arianna, you're awesome.
Beautiful poem❤️ I enjoy your choice of words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

Thank you for thinking so Daniela, I'm more than glad that you liked it.
Outstanding poem. Myth and tale my favorite. Artwork and words. Perfect. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

Gracias mi amigo, You the man John!
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are very kind and you are welcome.

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