Her Vail

Her Vail

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The moon calls down to me.

Your Majesty.

Are you mad at me?

What's the cause for this summoning?

She has done more than

Swept me off my feet.

A Love catastrophe,

But not a travesty.

What a feat...

She lures the water from within.

Outer-body.

I'm out of my body.

Are you the existence of my sin?

The 9 over my 6.

~Astrology~

Astromancer.

My Cancer.

Two Crescents,

But is it you

That'll make me full?

So I close my eyes

To see if I'm alive.

I need you to reply!

Do I need to die

To find the truth that

Lies in your lies?

My most pleasant high.

Hard to believe in

That you are hard to believe in.

The reason why my heart is bleeding.

I have a need for more,

But I don't need you anymore.

War in

Days of

Yesterdays.

You left me far behind the sun's rays.



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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stream of thought associations raising conflicted thought and emotion ..what loftier comedy than love to be able to summon such confusion ;) i looked up the definition of Vale to be sure ... vale, veil, vail ... such an array .. what a heart break in closing ..hope your hero survives to love again :{
E.


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sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

I Hope i do as Wellllll



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I love this so much! No fluff, each word, each line carries meaning. Beautiful flow

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Are you the existence of my sin is so eye catchingly phenomenal

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this poem is really nice. i love it

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"Hard to believe in
That you are hard to believe in.
The reason why my heart is bleeding.
I have a need for more,
But I don't need you anymore.
War in
Days of
Yesterdays.
You left me far behind the sun's rays."
My favourite part of the poem. Beautifully written.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

place it in your heart 4 me
Adorable, l love the way you express your emotions it's pretty good poem

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sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

My exes press me
Beautiful. I like how the emotions flows from one word to another. Just beautiful. :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

I'm glad that you did, and thank you!
stream of thought associations raising conflicted thought and emotion ..what loftier comedy than love to be able to summon such confusion ;) i looked up the definition of Vale to be sure ... vale, veil, vail ... such an array .. what a heart break in closing ..hope your hero survives to love again :{
E.


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

I Hope i do as Wellllll
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Ari
I absolutely adore the first three lines and the last line. Very well written... just beautiful

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sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Arianna, you're awesome.
Beautiful poem❤️ I enjoy your choice of words.

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sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Thank you for thinking so Daniela, I'm more than glad that you liked it.
Outstanding poem. Myth and tale my favorite. Artwork and words. Perfect. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Gracias mi amigo, You the man John!
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are very kind and you are welcome.

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