I identify with so many aspects of this. It seems to be uniquely crafted. (I read quite a bit on in the site. More often than not, if I have no constructive criticism, or praise then, I don't leave a review at all)
This was a nice change of pase for me. I found the twists within such a short amount of writing, impressive and refreshing. There is a other worldly romance, mixed with a bit of a seductive tango. In the small amount of lines used, the imagery was conveyed vividly and beautifully. Personally, I feel like that is what your standard poetry is about. Conveying and demonstrating as much feeling as possible through the use of carefully orchestrated phrases.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
♤BE♤
"Hard to believe in
That you are hard to believe in.
The reason why my heart is bleeding.
I have a need for more,
But I don't need you anymore.
War in
Days of
Yesterdays.
You left me far behind the sun's rays."
My favourite part of the poem. Beautifully written.
stream of thought associations raising conflicted thought and emotion ..what loftier comedy than love to be able to summon such confusion ;) i looked up the definition of Vale to be sure ... vale, veil, vail ... such an array .. what a heart break in closing ..hope your hero survives to love again :{
E.