Out(H)er Space

Out(H)er Space

A Poem by sinNsincerity

please bless him.
Yes he.
Better yet,
be Mystic.

Kissless, especially when your quickening of solemn bliss commits the offense of sporting Celtic green lipstick.

So grimy...
Come find Me.
If so-
So smite me

right where
your shamrock heart felt apart
and where you buried the dried up leafs crumbled up somewhere in between the weeks.

Love was born forever and the ink spilled in and beyond the sheets.
I know I say good bye, but I don't know,
I don't know. The poetry keeps telling me to continue the worship of thee.

You asked for three, but I gave you six.
No wishes, just bites,
so let the coffin nail pins sink into your skin.

Please bless him

© 2017 sinNsincerity

Author's Note

I acknowledge the power of magik

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good strong imagery, really like the line "and the ink spilled in beyond the sheets"

Posted 5 Months Ago

Very seductive in its mystery yet so poignant in its expression.

Posted 7 Months Ago

Sort of feel sorry for him now.
Still, he did get an epitaph.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Good Movement and interesting theme. Thanks for the read.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Good job! It's definitely a genre that doesn't tickle my fancy, but all in all very well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago

The blessing has been served as this poem continues to flourished even if reading has already been finished. NIce write.


Posted 8 Months Ago

great poem
breath- taking and emotional

Posted 8 Months Ago

I enjoyed this very much! Loved the flow & the story.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Damn, i miss reading you David! This is unreal, genius and quite breathtaking. And apt description of most of the love stories out there...

Posted 9 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


9 Months Ago

Thank you Ana, I've miss sharing my poems. I've been keeping a lot to myself as of late, but I am tr.. read more
amazing....keep writing👏👏👏

Posted 9 Months Ago

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