UnModern Art

UnModern Art

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Her idol was once the object of her fantasies,

but you see,

marble eyes are beautiful,

but they cannot see what I see.

Unless,

Unless,

Yes...

-I could bring you to life

with the worship of Aphrodite,

but unlike Pygmalion,

My moon stood the moon

and the prostitution of my mind continues...

Who will I find?



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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Have you ever watched a movie by the name of "May"? It's an extremely creepy take on the Frankenstein tale (without Frankenstein). I'm probably misinterpreting this but your poem made me think of that movie and it's titular character. May... that b***h is crazy.

Even being far off on the meaning, I still think this is well written. You always write well, even when I attach my own meaning... it seems to work. Good job, again.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I have not, but I will soon.and don't worry about misinterpreting my poem. I don't want readers to t.. read more
DDave

1 Year Ago

I feel the same way about my own writing. Do find a way to watch "May" sometime... it's surprisingl.. read more
sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

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Amazing use of words and thoughts my friend. If we could bring to life the mysteries of life. Would be a interesting world. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

And I was just watching that movie Weird Science yesterday. Have you seen it?
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I may have. A older movie.
sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

It is an old movie. Where these two high school dudes feel like they are losers, but they are really.. read more
Ooh! So scandalous and raw, loved every minute of this and the contemplation brought on to the reader to interpret what it brought to the mind's eye for them. Fantastic as always

Posted 11 Months Ago


This is a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Months Ago


It's stunningly deep yet beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Do tell...
To dream of one created
in an image sought out by one's soul.
It's only a dream or it could result in a night terror.
Well thought out and captured in words.

Posted 1 Year Ago



The language that you use is so fitting. It flows well and your ideas cohere. An enjoyable read!

Thank you for sharing! I love reading your writing
~J

PS
I would pick my favorite lines but I can't choose. The work as a whole is wonderful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Really good! Its been awhile since I was last on here and I enjoyed this

Posted 1 Year Ago



"and the prostitution of my mind continues"
I love this idk why.
The poem is very good and it brings me many thoughts and feelings.

100/100
xx

Posted 1 Year Ago


marble eyes are beautiful
but they can not see what I see

Love this line. Thought provoking and lovely.

Posted 1 Year Ago


ahahaha love the mythology in your poem and who has not wished to make real the stone beauty ... or the wooden Pinocchio ;) enjoyed reading ..nice straight forward and simplicity of language but a complex theme ...could go many places between those lines
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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