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UnModern Art

UnModern Art

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Her idol was once the object of her fantasies,

but you see,

marble eyes are beautiful,

but they cannot see what I see.

Unless,

Unless,

Yes...

-I could bring you to life

with the worship of Aphrodite,

but unlike Pygmalion,

My moon stood the moon

and the prostitution of my mind continues...

Who will I find?



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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Have you ever watched a movie by the name of "May"? It's an extremely creepy take on the Frankenstein tale (without Frankenstein). I'm probably misinterpreting this but your poem made me think of that movie and it's titular character. May... that b***h is crazy.

Even being far off on the meaning, I still think this is well written. You always write well, even when I attach my own meaning... it seems to work. Good job, again.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

I have not, but I will soon.and don't worry about misinterpreting my poem. I don't want readers to t.. read more
Davey Tune Up

11 Months Ago

I feel the same way about my own writing. Do find a way to watch "May" sometime... it's surprisingl.. read more
sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

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Thought provoking words, and even if I don't entirely understand your motivation, the imagery of a marble statue, particularly in the moonlight lets the mind travel.

Some of those blank eyes, with that haunting translucent beauty, which might once have been painted... still almost as perfect as when they were sculpted, have seen two thousand years or more. What they might have seen and who they represent..??

Posted 11 Months Ago


This really speaks to my heart, I can relate well, which makes it such a beautiful expression.Beautifully written . really enjoyed reading it.
Makes you wonder abt your thinking processes, soul sacrifice once again . This is the second poem I've read of yours and lovely reading/writing.Though didnt understand a bit of it, but enjoyed the implications thoroughly.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I'll be reading this again and again. It fascinates me, which I enjoy. I can't quite take it all in, sorting out all the nooks and crannies. Well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


who knows,she may still be alive

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

AYYYEEE! Maybe so....
Have you ever watched a movie by the name of "May"? It's an extremely creepy take on the Frankenstein tale (without Frankenstein). I'm probably misinterpreting this but your poem made me think of that movie and it's titular character. May... that b***h is crazy.

Even being far off on the meaning, I still think this is well written. You always write well, even when I attach my own meaning... it seems to work. Good job, again.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

I have not, but I will soon.and don't worry about misinterpreting my poem. I don't want readers to t.. read more
Davey Tune Up

11 Months Ago

I feel the same way about my own writing. Do find a way to watch "May" sometime... it's surprisingl.. read more
sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
Timeless questions my friend, timeless. ''Prostitution of mind'' - that's freaking awesome! Lovely work and path for thoughts David :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

I'm really glad you enjoyed that phrase Ana because it's one of my faves. Always such a pleasure to .. read more
Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Anytime David.

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