My Faithful Bosom

My Faithful Bosom

A Poem by sinNsincerity

It's been days since I've seen her face,

so I'm dazed and deluded from the ambrosia

of thoughts left behind from Cupid's arrow of amnesia.

Impatient with forgotten time.

My forgotten mind has left cracks in sundials from broken memories.

Allthewhile, out of my mind, and the plight of the forsaken path has lead me in a zigzag, and despite the hidden angles, fate has guided me straight towards your twine of guile and luxury.

Dear Angel, your galaxy is excellent when

kissing on your innocence.

How intimate

How excellent

How?

Please

Please me

please love me

Please me please

Please love me, please.

Are you pleased?



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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sinNsincerity
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awwwwwwwwwww love the vulnerability and your play with words and alterations .. separating them a tad is pretty cool ..i think i will take that tool with me for some misty future poem ;) i usually put them one after the other and it never occurred to me to do otherwise ... very emotive ...i leave my begging heart at the alter and can only hope ...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I can feel the ramping desperation of those last lines matched by the changing structure of the poem - surprisingly effective.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Desperately Needing

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 1 Month Ago


Really enjoyed this piece and all it gives to be considered. Desperation and entanglement that comes from love and our need to feel it is so accurately captured here.

My favorite line...

so I'm dazed and deluded from the ambrosia
of thoughts left behind from Cupid's arrow of amnesia.

Posted 1 Month Ago


The structure of the poem fascinates me. The theme like a confusing dream that you don't want to leave. Nice.

Posted 2 Months Ago


The need to be pleased , loved, and to please the one that you love... Very nice

Posted 2 Months Ago


the sweet sound of love,this is what we should be about

Posted 3 Months Ago


Nice wording. I like your work very much.

Posted 3 Months Ago


very nice and thanks for sharing your poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sweet, kind and joyous use of words. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts leading to perfect question. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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