Throw It all away for Love

Throw It all away for Love

A Poem by sinNsincerity
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Gospel

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You could never understand my pain.

Even if I allowed you to enter my brain.

So for heaven’s sake, I safeguard my heart, so you could never slide inside

unless we create an exodus in bed and partake in tasting the flesh.

And the secrets would most likely push you away, and that'll prove my point, so don't point the blame on me when you say I have brought pain onto you.

The girl I gave away my virginity to is so sacred and placed a curse on me, and it works so perfectly.

I throw it all away for Love.

If I don't throw it all away,

I will become...

It hurts so much to be,

so mote it be.


© 2017 sinNsincerity



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lots of angles addressed in this poem...i read some of the comments on flow and see how it seems so jagged ... there are many points vying for attention .. and the language switches back and forth form a very colloquial style to more classic ..such as "partake" of the flesh and the exodus in bed .. especially that being the condition held for your protagonist to allow a lover into his heart .. very conflicting ... and "mote" ... for me these change ups really make me think...and read again ... i like your closing two lines especially ...such great pain ... no matter how small it may seem to others is the way i take that ... obviously this poem hooked me ;) it is very different
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

Hook, line, and sinker!
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

:) ..............



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Emotionally engaging and forlorn. Without the risk of pain their is no pleasure to be had. Very thought provoking.

Posted 3 Months Ago


i love this, out of all honesty you could improve on the flow of the poem, maybe even add more difficult words to make it more interesting or change some words. other than that, It is a great poem and i want to see more.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lots of angles addressed in this poem...i read some of the comments on flow and see how it seems so jagged ... there are many points vying for attention .. and the language switches back and forth form a very colloquial style to more classic ..such as "partake" of the flesh and the exodus in bed .. especially that being the condition held for your protagonist to allow a lover into his heart .. very conflicting ... and "mote" ... for me these change ups really make me think...and read again ... i like your closing two lines especially ...such great pain ... no matter how small it may seem to others is the way i take that ... obviously this poem hooked me ;) it is very different
E.

Posted 8 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

Hook, line, and sinker!
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

:) ..............
i like this a lot..

your flow was on point, literally the entire poem

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

for sure, just send me the read request. And if I really like it, I'll send it to my peeps.
Truly a touching piece. So relatable 🖤

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. Very relatable. I feel your pain. The one thing I would say, is to improve the flow of the poem. It seems kind of crammed. Try to separate them, try to make it as you're telling a story. Try to slow it down, piece by piece. However, otherwise it's very good. Enjoyed it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this poem. I have threw away so many things for someone I though I loved but in reality it wasn't meant to be. Great poem :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

I'm just the opposite. I had someone who was meant to be and threw away love for other things...ther.. read more
Lauren_The_Awesome

11 Months Ago

Oh. I'm sorry. I've been through many relationships that they either didn't care for me so much or w.. read more
Wow wow wow!! I felt your words in my soul! I too can relate to this poem. I am a sucker for love just as much as I am a stubborn lover who never wants to let go!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

Thank you Benita, I'm glad that you could relate and that you had enjoyed it. I once was like you an.. read more
pretty good and emotion felt , keep up the work and ways that you express yourself i cant wait to see the upcoming pieces


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devious13

11 Months Ago

Why. Thanks for asking love. I'm give jus . Busy. With day to day. Is all. Yourself??
sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

Well thank you for taking time to step out of your busy life to visit me. I am blessed to be here as.. read more
Devious13

11 Months Ago

i can understand that all to well at least you see the blessing some take the .. read more
what does the last line mean? Could thoroughly empathize with your words , that added to the beauty of my experience as usual. Simple and understood, well done

Posted 11 Months Ago



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