Throw It all away for Love

Throw It all away for Love

A Poem by sinNsincerity
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Gospel

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You could never understand my pain.

Even if I allowed you to enter my brain.

So for heaven’s sake, I safeguard my heart, so you could never slide inside

unless we create an exodus in bed and partake in tasting the flesh.

And the secrets would most likely push you away, and that'll prove my point, so don't point the blame on me when you say I have brought pain onto you.

The girl I gave away my virginity to is so sacred and placed a curse on me, and it works so perfectly.

I throw it all away for Love.

If I don't throw it all away,

I will become...

It hurts so much to be,

so mote it be.


© 2017 sinNsincerity



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I love it. Very relatable. I feel your pain. The one thing I would say, is to improve the flow of the poem. It seems kind of crammed. Try to separate them, try to make it as you're telling a story. Try to slow it down, piece by piece. However, otherwise it's very good. Enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The poem is ok. But you can do better. You have better poems people can read. I didn't like the part with the virginity thing haha. Maybe you can Find a better way to express it? Maybe a methapor?

My favorite part was:
I throw it all away for Love.
If I don't throw it all away,
...

I'm sure you can do better! Don't fall!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Jes' Pi

4 Months Ago

Well, work hard! Working is the key of success! Sometimes we fall and sometimes we rise up! My work .. read more
sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

I'm already successful. I've turned down publishing offers except for one and I left that. They don'.. read more
Jes' Pi

4 Months Ago

Well, write for you, and then for others. There is not a limit when it'a about being the best. You c.. read more
Perhaps love teaches us about pain....A poem with the touch of pain, love brings in its wake. Enjoyed reading this so much.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

Thank you DIVYA, I'm really glad that you had enjoyed it. It's my pleasure.
what pain can causes into us. simply beautiful ....


Posted 4 Months Ago


Waaw it's so touching.
Amazing





Posted 4 Months Ago


Truly a heart touching piece with lessons to remember. Throwing it all away for love could only be wither fiery or as cold as ice.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 4 Months Ago


It's just so pretty? I really don't know how else to put it. Painfully pretty

Posted 4 Months Ago


damn,love can be so cold,it`s almost like god tricked us all about love,sometimes it`s just not worth the pain

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Ty
Cascading rhythm and precision over a firm message.

Posted 4 Months Ago


We like to hang on to what is already gone from our lives - it causes us to suffer and in turn causes those around us to suffer because of it - in allowing one relationship to dissipate back into the folds of the universe we are able to greet new ones with new lessons learnt with fresh eyes ... the key is though, we gotta first learn how to let go, otherwise we may never see the beauty right underneath our noses.

I feel for the current girl ....

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

and i'm at the gallows with my hand on the lever, should I pull it?
KWP

4 Months Ago

nah ... probably something you'd end up regretting in the next realm ;)
sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

shux...hmm...
Hey thanks for sharing, I like this piece.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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