Throw It all away for Love

Throw It all away for Love

A Poem by sinNsincerity
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Gospel

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You could never understand my pain.

Even if I allowed you to enter my brain.

So for heaven’s sake, I safeguard my heart, so you could never slide inside

unless we create an exodus in bed and partake in tasting the flesh.

And the secrets would most likely push you away, and that'll prove my point, so don't point the blame on me when you say I have brought pain onto you.

The girl I gave away my virginity to is so sacred and placed a curse on me, and it works so perfectly.

I throw it all away for Love.

If I don't throw it all away,

I will become...

It hurts so much to be,

so mote it be.


© 2017 sinNsincerity



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It's a decent idea, but the piece has some flow problems. The rhythm isn't there for me. I read it three or four times, but it still seemed to mesh unevenly. I could rationalize that, given the subject of the piece, the breaks in flow could represent the uneven feelings of heartbreak, or betrayal, but there's just something missing. Experimentation is great to improve your own skills, but this doesn't read like it's finished. Take all of this with a grain of salt, of course. Happy writing, Sin.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Is that salt iodized? Haha
No worries, I love when people give me their honest opinion. Some.. read more



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what pain can causes into us. simply beautiful ....


Posted 1 Month Ago


Waaw it's so touching.
Amazing





Posted 1 Month Ago


Truly a heart touching piece with lessons to remember. Throwing it all away for love could only be wither fiery or as cold as ice.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 2 Months Ago


It's just so pretty? I really don't know how else to put it. Painfully pretty

Posted 2 Months Ago


damn,love can be so cold,it`s almost like god tricked us all about love,sometimes it`s just not worth the pain

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Cascading rhythm and precision over a firm message.

Posted 2 Months Ago


We like to hang on to what is already gone from our lives - it causes us to suffer and in turn causes those around us to suffer because of it - in allowing one relationship to dissipate back into the folds of the universe we are able to greet new ones with new lessons learnt with fresh eyes ... the key is though, we gotta first learn how to let go, otherwise we may never see the beauty right underneath our noses.

I feel for the current girl ....

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

and i'm at the gallows with my hand on the lever, should I pull it?
KWP

1 Month Ago

nah ... probably something you'd end up regretting in the next realm ;)
sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

shux...hmm...
Hey thanks for sharing, I like this piece.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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