Feeling Restless-Rest Us

Feeling Restless-Rest Us

A Poem by sinNsincerity
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Gospel

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I don't cry no more..

So don't cry when I don't reply.

The streets,

my home,

and my people-

The love ones I call

Family- have left me cold.

Have let me down

(have taken my halo; broken it into two)

and have left me the frown.

So I've turned them down,

down towards the drugs and booze

to darken my mind.

Hell...

I could no longer mind my mind

because my dreams were no longer mine,

and the tobacco has helped with the blackening of my soul.

So-

Soul?

Are you with me God?

My spirit is divine,

but my innocence is no longer

Mine

My

Ra

Mayra

My Goddess

No Egyptian,

but better.

My Nayarit Maya.

I gave my heart to Ya

And you fucked it up

Yea

And Yet, I yet to continue your Worship...

War and Ships

But you?

Dropped bombs of ecstasy, faith, and hope

straight down from my inner space.

Any time the ground rattled, shook, and marveled;

Your touch took me to the

                                                         N

                                                 O

                                           O

M

But where are you now?

But you should be the ONE

that should be

?uestioning me

because I couldn't make up my

mind and where I stood,

So I left you far behind.

That’s All that I know.

Oh how I don't cry

with the exception of you

and those Butterscotch Sonic Green

EYES.

My Dear,

do you remember

when you told me

I was you SIN?

But I told you,

I was SiNCERE.

My Dear,

I don't cry no more,

and that's my sin.

Sincerely,

Yours.




© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be

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This is a heat storm, bro. My goodness.

"I could no longer mind my mind
because my dreams were no longer mine"

^ This, and what you did with the layout of M O O N, among other things.

Felt this, too- I relate to it. She might never, ever leave your thoughts for good. Solid, man.

Posted 9 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Awe thank you brother, I'm glad you dig it man and could relate. That's all I want.
What did .. read more
Asante

9 Months Ago

(have taken my halo; snapped it in two)
and have left me the frown.
So I've turned the.. read more



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Wonderful use of words. You made the reader believe your words and your thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


I really enjoy the ending of this. It hits deep. I enjoy your writing! And the layout of it is phenomenal. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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As always, I enjoyed it. Such a combo of beauty and street. My favorite kind of writing, the soul of a poet the tongue of the street.

Nice write holmes.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

Thank you Mrs. Powers, I'm glad that you had enjoyed it.
I feel resentment, regret, and, despair in this poem. It seems you have a soft spot for that one person here but not even they can pull a tear from your eye.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

I used to feel those thing, but not anymore. I had to tap into that energy though to rekindle the me.. read more
what a delectable read..the back and forth..gods and humans ...dreams and realities really like the form .. especially how you handle the MOON ..easy flow for me ..really like this one .. and the word play..very clever my friend
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Very well put ! Really liked the concept.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I really love this. Feels very personal. I love how it flows very fluently. Keep it up.

Posted 8 Months Ago


very nice poem, loved reading it, hope you didnt have to go through all that in real,nicely penned, good expression and all else too, always fascinated by your poems.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Yes! I liked this one! Very good!😆

Posted 8 Months Ago


Damn... this is the best thing I've read on this site in months. If not the best then at least the most personally relatable and to me that counts for just as much.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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