Feeling Restless-Rest Us

Feeling Restless-Rest Us

A Poem by sinNsincerity
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Gospel

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I don't cry no more..

So don't cry when I don't reply.

The streets,

my home,

and my people-

The love ones I call

Family- have left me cold.

Have let me down

(have taken my halo; broken it into two)

and have left me the frown.

So I've turned them down,

down towards the drugs and booze

to darken my mind.

Hell...

I could no longer mind my mind

because my dreams were no longer mine,

and the tobacco has helped with the blackening of my soul.

So-

Soul?

Are you with me God?

My spirit is divine,

but my innocence is no longer

Mine

My

Ra

Mayra

My Goddess

No Egyptian,

but better.

My Nayarit Maya.

I gave my heart to Ya

And you fucked it up

Yea

And Yet, I yet to continue your Worship...

War and Ships

But you?

Dropped bombs of ecstasy, faith, and hope

straight down from my inner space.

Any time the ground rattled, shook, and marveled;

Your touch took me to the

                                                         N

                                                 O

                                           O

M

But where are you now?

But you should be the ONE

that should be

?uestioning me

because I couldn't make up my

mind and where I stood,

So I left you far behind.

That’s All that I know.

Oh how I don't cry

with the exception of you

and those Butterscotch Sonic Green

EYES.

My Dear,

do you remember

when you told me

I was you SIN?

But I told you,

I was SiNCERE.

My Dear,

I don't cry no more,

and that's my sin.

Sincerely,

Yours.




© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be

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This is a heat storm, bro. My goodness.

"I could no longer mind my mind
because my dreams were no longer mine"

^ This, and what you did with the layout of M O O N, among other things.

Felt this, too- I relate to it. She might never, ever leave your thoughts for good. Solid, man.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Awe thank you brother, I'm glad you dig it man and could relate. That's all I want.
What did .. read more
Asante

3 Weeks Ago

(have taken my halo; snapped it in two)
and have left me the frown.
So I've turned the.. read more



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I really love this. Feels very personal. I love how it flows very fluently. Keep it up.

Posted 5 Days Ago


very nice poem, loved reading it, hope you didnt have to go through all that in real,nicely penned, good expression and all else too, always fascinated by your poems.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Yes! I liked this one! Very good!😆

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Damn... this is the best thing I've read on this site in months. If not the best then at least the most personally relatable and to me that counts for just as much.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The visual effect created with the word Moon is appreciated very much and adds such emphasis to the point being made. In my view a very rare person deserves to be cried for but we are human after all...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

The moon commands my respect, she takes the blows for me. Have you seen the scars on her surface? Bu.. read more
DIVYA

2 Weeks Ago

You are most welcome. Its always feels great to get a new perspective on things of poetry...like the.. read more
I really like the structure of this poem! Flows really well and the imagery was heartbreaking (in a good way!). Fantastic writing~

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

My heart has been broken(in ways)
My pleasure Luci
Nice structure. I may try writing in this manner. It might not come easy to me, but if you look me up, I'd love to receive your feedback. Words and experiences are so personal to one. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

Careful now...
Oh wow! Every time i read your poems i think there's no way it could be better than the last one. But you always prove me wrong. I just love it, especially this part:
''I gave my heart to Ya
And you fucked it up
Yea
And Yet, I yet to continue your Worship...''

holly s**t, that's just amazing. Can't say i relate though, hate to admit that i was always kinda on the other side of the story, ya know, the heart breaker...Take good care David :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

I'm sure you'll be fine if you find someone who is as complete as you are and vibes on the same freq.. read more
Ana B.

3 Weeks Ago

I understand. Well, i hope you will find the one who will be in sync with you :) I'll be rooting for.. read more
sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
This is a heat storm, bro. My goodness.

"I could no longer mind my mind
because my dreams were no longer mine"

^ This, and what you did with the layout of M O O N, among other things.

Felt this, too- I relate to it. She might never, ever leave your thoughts for good. Solid, man.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Awe thank you brother, I'm glad you dig it man and could relate. That's all I want.
What did .. read more
Asante

3 Weeks Ago

(have taken my halo; snapped it in two)
and have left me the frown.
So I've turned the.. read more
A tryst with faith and life. This speaks of something broken that won't mend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Good Day!!!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Weeks Ago

The days are good

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