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Feeling Restless-Rest Us

A Poem by sinNsincerity
"

Gospel

"

I don't cry no more..

So don't cry when I don't reply.

The streets,

my home,

and my people-

The love ones I call

Family- have left me cold.

Have let me down

(have taken my halo; broken it into two)

and have left me the frown.

So I've turned them down,

down towards the drugs and booze

to darken my mind.

Hell...

I could no longer mind my mind

because my dreams were no longer mine,

and the tobacco has helped with the blackening of my soul.

So-

Soul?

Are you with me God?

My spirit is divine,

but my innocence is no longer

Mine

My

Ra

Mayra

My Goddess

No Egyptian,

but better.

My Nayarit Maya.

I gave my heart to Ya

And you fucked it up

Yea

And Yet, I yet to continue your Worship...

War and Ships

But you?

Dropped bombs of ecstasy, faith, and hope

straight down from my inner space.

Any time the ground rattled, shook, and marveled;

Your touch took me to the

                                                         N

                                                 O

                                           O

M

But where are you now?

But you should be the ONE

that should be

?uestioning me

because I couldn't make up my

mind and where I stood,

So I left you far behind.

That’s All that I know.

Oh how I don't cry

with the exception of you

and those Butterscotch Sonic Green

EYES.

My Dear,

do you remember

when you told me

I was you SIN?

But I told you,

I was SiNCERE.

My Dear,

I don't cry no more,

and that's my sin.

Sincerely,

Yours.




© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be

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This is a heat storm, bro. My goodness.

"I could no longer mind my mind
because my dreams were no longer mine"

^ This, and what you did with the layout of M O O N, among other things.

Felt this, too- I relate to it. She might never, ever leave your thoughts for good. Solid, man.

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Awe thank you brother, I'm glad you dig it man and could relate. That's all I want.
What did .. read more
Asante

10 Months Ago

(have taken my halo; snapped it in two)
and have left me the frown.
So I've turned the.. read more



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The visual effect created with the word Moon is appreciated very much and adds such emphasis to the point being made. In my view a very rare person deserves to be cried for but we are human after all...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

The moon commands my respect, she takes the blows for me. Have you seen the scars on her surface? Bu.. read more
DIVYA

10 Months Ago

You are most welcome. Its always feels great to get a new perspective on things of poetry...like the.. read more
I really like the structure of this poem! Flows really well and the imagery was heartbreaking (in a good way!). Fantastic writing~

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

My heart has been broken(in ways)
My pleasure Luci
Nice structure. I may try writing in this manner. It might not come easy to me, but if you look me up, I'd love to receive your feedback. Words and experiences are so personal to one. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Careful now...
Oh wow! Every time i read your poems i think there's no way it could be better than the last one. But you always prove me wrong. I just love it, especially this part:
''I gave my heart to Ya
And you fucked it up
Yea
And Yet, I yet to continue your Worship...''

holly s**t, that's just amazing. Can't say i relate though, hate to admit that i was always kinda on the other side of the story, ya know, the heart breaker...Take good care David :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

I'm sure you'll be fine if you find someone who is as complete as you are and vibes on the same freq.. read more
Ana B.

10 Months Ago

I understand. Well, i hope you will find the one who will be in sync with you :) I'll be rooting for.. read more
sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
This is a heat storm, bro. My goodness.

"I could no longer mind my mind
because my dreams were no longer mine"

^ This, and what you did with the layout of M O O N, among other things.

Felt this, too- I relate to it. She might never, ever leave your thoughts for good. Solid, man.

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Awe thank you brother, I'm glad you dig it man and could relate. That's all I want.
What did .. read more
Asante

10 Months Ago

(have taken my halo; snapped it in two)
and have left me the frown.
So I've turned the.. read more
A tryst with faith and life. This speaks of something broken that won't mend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Good Day!!!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

The days are good
First love...ahhh...nice write! That space between...then true love outshines the first.
Well done David! Loved this one!
Tabby

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tabby Mac

10 Months Ago

Good. Just busy. I long for a minute to write!
sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Totally. I just got into it this.past month myself. I'll be looking forward to reading what you crea.. read more
Tabby Mac

10 Months Ago

Always a pleasure!
a touching write,tells a great story

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Thank you Ron, you da man!
Wow this is nice. thanks for sharing it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Thank you Roxane, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!
I could not not cry reading this. Even line was like a quick jab to the heart, I could feel the immense pain and sorrow. I am sorry you hurt this way, but I am here. Just hope you don't mind my "Butterscotch Sonic Green EYES."

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Dam hon, that's deep. Thank you! I do hurt, but I transmute that energy into compassion for others w.. read more
Eleña   ♥ Milan

10 Months Ago

And that is a gift given to only by the most special people. Your heart is amazing

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