Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

A Poem by sinNsincerity

My battery is depleted.

The Son hasn't been giving

me the energy that is needed.

Ra, are you jealous that my mind

is possessed and obsessed by the light

of Osiris (Witch) was lost by the game of dice?

Sirius,

Such a Craft leaves me Wicked.

Moon's bright hides the dark sky

and summons the dark from my inside.

Star Light.

Lord of love.

Lord of silence.

Will Machik be used by Isis to

rekindle the flame that was once mine?

Why has it taken you so long to

deliver me back a piece of my life?

Be my guest.

Be my quest.

Be my chest.

No Peace

Just the pieces of me that have been

ripped apart and scattered.

And I'm tired of being kept quite

when speaking on BE/Half of my broken heart.



© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be
The Black Cat

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Damn, bro. The wordplay here is STRONG--from the use of near-rhymes, to the way this flowed together in theme and in continuity from beginning to end. Speaking of the end, those last eight lines? Forget about it.

This gave me strong Lupe vibes, and he's one of my favorite MC's so that's saying a lot.

Digging this in a big way, man.

Posted 3 Days Ago


How emotional, it's true that a lot of people would prefer us to keep quiet when expressing our grief and frustrations at the world.

Posted 1 Week Ago


this was amazing. like always
;D

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Elena, how have you been?
Interesting. Very good. I liked it.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I like your word choices, such a nice piece

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, it's my pleasure.
Very beautiful. So fluid and so real. Thank you for this

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for thinking so Brenda, I'm glad you had enjoyed it.
Very nice blending of mythology with contemporary drama themes. Additionally, you have very beautiful imagery. You managed to make this free flowing poem and make it both grand and relatable.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Why thank you Hannah, I'm doing my best to keep the flow of my eye as raw as possible with the combi.. read more
I like the way you intertwined the words with mythical magic.... passionate write!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

I acknowledge the power of Machik.
Nice nicely done i loves this.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

.......SEGA
Thank you for this poem. Very well written

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

You are most welcome.

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sinNsincerity

East Los Angeles, CA



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