Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

A Poem by sinNsincerity

My battery is depleted.

The Son hasn't been giving

me the energy that is needed.

Ra, are you jealous that my mind

is possessed and obsessed by the light

of Osiris (Witch) was lost by the game of dice?

Sirius,

Such a Craft leaves me Wicked.

Moon's bright hides the dark sky

and summons the dark from my inside.

Star Light.

Lord of love.

Lord of silence.

Will Machik be used by Isis to

rekindle the flame that was once mine?

Why has it taken you so long to

deliver me back a piece of my life?

Be my guest.

Be my quest.

Be my chest.

No Peace

Just the pieces of me that have been

ripped apart and scattered.

And I'm tired of being kept quite

when speaking on BE/Half of my broken heart.



© 2018 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be
The Black Cat

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This is some of the most creative imagery I have read in some time... your poetic voice is truly unique!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Month Ago

Why it's my pleasure.
I think you should do a short story in the scheme... I'd love to see how it would turn out.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Such a Craft leaves me Wicked.
Moon's bright hides the dark sky
and summons the dark from my inside.
Star Light.
Lord of love.
Lord of silence.

I so loved this part this is really good. amazing write here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Gah, I'm a sucker for ancient mythology, divine poetry dear David, as always, a new addition for my library :) happy holidays!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

As am I, and I'm really glad that you enjoyed it Ana. Always a pleasure to know you did. Happy Holid.. read more
As Egyptian , i can tell you that l loved this piece 😊 , using of Egyptian gods names make it more interesting :))

Posted 4 Months Ago


what a challenging, interesting mix of clever word play, Egyptian gods and human frailty ... this one is beyond me ken ...but the sense of brokenness is strong in your closing ...
E.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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This is very creative! What a fresh idea to start a poem

Posted 5 Months Ago


Damn, bro. The wordplay here is STRONG--from the use of near-rhymes, to the way this flowed together in theme and in continuity from beginning to end. Speaking of the end, those last eight lines? Forget about it.

This gave me strong Lupe vibes, and he's one of my favorite MC's so that's saying a lot.

Digging this in a big way, man.

Posted 5 Months Ago


How emotional, it's true that a lot of people would prefer us to keep quiet when expressing our grief and frustrations at the world.

Posted 5 Months Ago


this was amazing. like always
;D

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

Thanks Elena, how have you been?

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