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Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

A Poem by sinNsincerity

My battery is depleted.

The Son hasn't been giving

me the energy that is needed.

Ra, are you jealous that my mind

is possessed and obsessed by the light

of Osiris (Witch) was lost by the game of dice?

Sirius,

Such a Craft leaves me Wicked.

Moon's bright hides the dark sky

and summons the dark from my inside.

Star Light.

Lord of love.

Lord of silence.

Will Machik be used by Isis to

rekindle the flame that was once mine?

Why has it taken you so long to

deliver me back a piece of my life?

Be my guest.

Be my quest.

Be my chest.

No Peace

Just the pieces of me that have been

ripped apart and scattered.

And I'm tired of being kept quite

when speaking on BE/Half of my broken heart.



© 2018 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be
The Black Cat

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Interesting. Very good. I liked it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


I like your word choices, such a nice piece

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Thank you, it's my pleasure.
Very beautiful. So fluid and so real. Thank you for this

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Thank you for thinking so Brenda, I'm glad you had enjoyed it.
Very nice blending of mythology with contemporary drama themes. Additionally, you have very beautiful imagery. You managed to make this free flowing poem and make it both grand and relatable.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Why thank you Hannah, I'm doing my best to keep the flow of my eye as raw as possible with the combi.. read more
I like the way you intertwined the words with mythical magic.... passionate write!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

I acknowledge the power of Machik.
Nice nicely done i loves this.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

.......SEGA
Thank you for this poem. Very well written

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

You are most welcome.
Loved this .... "No Peace
Just the pieces of me that have been
ripped apart and scattered.
And I'm tired of being kept quite
when speaking on BE/Half of my broken heart."



Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

I'm glad that you did Erika.
re kindle the love,oh sirus move upon isics and bring
back the passion i so desire

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

And the spell is commenced...
You took me back to Egypt. Nicely worded. Keep writing more.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

I'm glad that I could do so Ayesha. Always!

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