Island Bonfire

Island Bonfire

A Poem by sinNsincerity

My heart breaths musty

Trust me

Ask she

Surely,

the stench of my

Love will thrust thee

against me.

Vulturing through

mountains and valleys. . .

I'm starving,

but my problems desert me

when speaking through

Joshua trees.

Can you hear me?

If not,

please feel my

energy of thirst.

Enter the Garden of Hesperides

and find paradise in my mind.

Mind you

become mindful

of the moon's full.

And if so,

My love will be

4 you.





© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be
The Black Cat

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very interesting revelations of the speaker .."...stench of my Love..." is the allure ... not to make light of the nymphs .. i use to trap all kinds of fur bearing animals (i know...some may not agree) and the scent glands and lures i used were just like that ... an alluring stench ... so here is a lover completely revealed in what he supposes is almost too terrible to reveal ..yet reveal it he does ... and for the very special one that sees through it ... ahhhhhhhhhh well love may be theirs ... ;) i like this poem a lot...i think it has a creative, strong voice ...
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

The words are the nymphs/aliens if you're vibing in the right frequency as I was when my spirit comp.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

i feel you man...so ...yes you did :) read it again ..very strong emotive poem my friend ...



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Pretty strong and evocative.

Posted 1 Week Ago


BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I'm starving,
but my problems desert me
when speaking through
Joshua trees.

That little strip there was flawless, bro. Desert, Joshua Trees, etc. I vibe with this overall. I get an Indie/Underground rap kind of feeling when I read this, too.

Had to pop in & check out your latest!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I like The imagery that the descriptive words brought to mind. It provoked an intense emotion as I was reading, almost confrontational, but not in a violent or angry way.
Not sure if that’s where you were when you wrote it but hey...either way, I liked it

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Gentle, worthwhile and wonderful words for love. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


The relation to the title escapes me as I read on...
there's a presence of a relationship and bad vibes
and the sense of smell is not a good one.
Something went bad and rotted but did it leave?

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Different. In a good way. Nice to read something different from time to time.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


YES, YES, YES!

I cannot even begin to love this enough. Every, single, molecule.

Breathing these words feels like a sacred incantation. The intention is palpable.

Well done and powerfully charged.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Awe thank you. Sacred indeed, I allow my spirit roam free and the magic it retrieves is something el.. read more
Poetic License

3 Weeks Ago

Those of us who travel the gray line understand this best. Sending warm thoughts your way on this c.. read more
very interesting revelations of the speaker .."...stench of my Love..." is the allure ... not to make light of the nymphs .. i use to trap all kinds of fur bearing animals (i know...some may not agree) and the scent glands and lures i used were just like that ... an alluring stench ... so here is a lover completely revealed in what he supposes is almost too terrible to reveal ..yet reveal it he does ... and for the very special one that sees through it ... ahhhhhhhhhh well love may be theirs ... ;) i like this poem a lot...i think it has a creative, strong voice ...
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

The words are the nymphs/aliens if you're vibing in the right frequency as I was when my spirit comp.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

i feel you man...so ...yes you did :) read it again ..very strong emotive poem my friend ...
Very emotion, evoking. Liked how you used the choice arrangement of words to make your point. Great one, thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Month Ago



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