Island Bonfire

Island Bonfire

A Poem by sinNsincerity

My heart breaths musty

Trust me

Ask she

Surely,

the stench of my

Love will thrust thee

against me.

Vulturing through

mountains and valleys. . .

I'm starving,

but my problems desert me

when speaking through

Joshua trees.

Can you hear me?

If not,

please feel my

energy of thirst.

Enter the Garden of Hesperides

and find paradise in my mind.

Mind you

become mindful

of the moon's full.

And if so,

My love will be

4 you.





© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be
The Black Cat

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I like The imagery that the descriptive words brought to mind. It provoked an intense emotion as I was reading, almost confrontational, but not in a violent or angry way.
Not sure if that’s where you were when you wrote it but hey...either way, I liked it

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

I always come from my heart.



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mmmmmmmmmmmmm.............. Nice one love....... very nice....

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

Always Tiff.
Loved the punchy lines at the start, with the rhyming and short line lengths. Made it feel very active. Words like 'starving', 'stench' and 'thirst' made me really feel that it was an extreme desire and need for the other person. I liked.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

I want you to want me. Need you to need me...
Pretty strong and evocative.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

Thank you Ayesha.
BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

My pleasure Ayushi.
I'm starving,
but my problems desert me
when speaking through
Joshua trees.

That little strip there was flawless, bro. Desert, Joshua Trees, etc. I vibe with this overall. I get an Indie/Underground rap kind of feeling when I read this, too.

Had to pop in & check out your latest!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

Dude, I know right. That s**t is magikal!
I like The imagery that the descriptive words brought to mind. It provoked an intense emotion as I was reading, almost confrontational, but not in a violent or angry way.
Not sure if that’s where you were when you wrote it but hey...either way, I liked it

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Months Ago

I always come from my heart.
Gentle, worthwhile and wonderful words for love. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


The relation to the title escapes me as I read on...
there's a presence of a relationship and bad vibes
and the sense of smell is not a good one.
Something went bad and rotted but did it leave?

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Different. In a good way. Nice to read something different from time to time.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

8 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Diane, I'm glad that I could be different for you.
YES, YES, YES!

I cannot even begin to love this enough. Every, single, molecule.

Breathing these words feels like a sacred incantation. The intention is palpable.

Well done and powerfully charged.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

11 Months Ago

Awe thank you. Sacred indeed, I allow my spirit roam free and the magic it retrieves is something el.. read more
Poetic License

11 Months Ago

Those of us who travel the gray line understand this best. Sending warm thoughts your way on this c.. read more

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