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Island Bonfire

Island Bonfire

A Poem by sinNsincerity

My heart breaths musty

Trust me

Ask she

Surely,

the stench of my

Love will thrust thee

against me.

Vulturing through

mountains and valleys. . .

I'm starving,

but my problems desert me

when speaking through

Joshua trees.

Can you hear me?

If not,

please feel my

energy of thirst.

Enter the Garden of Hesperides

and find paradise in my mind.

Mind you

become mindful

of the moon's full.

And if so,

My love will be

4 you.





© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
So mote it be
The Black Cat

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I like The imagery that the descriptive words brought to mind. It provoked an intense emotion as I was reading, almost confrontational, but not in a violent or angry way.
Not sure if that’s where you were when you wrote it but hey...either way, I liked it

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

I always come from my heart.



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very interesting revelations of the speaker .."...stench of my Love..." is the allure ... not to make light of the nymphs .. i use to trap all kinds of fur bearing animals (i know...some may not agree) and the scent glands and lures i used were just like that ... an alluring stench ... so here is a lover completely revealed in what he supposes is almost too terrible to reveal ..yet reveal it he does ... and for the very special one that sees through it ... ahhhhhhhhhh well love may be theirs ... ;) i like this poem a lot...i think it has a creative, strong voice ...
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

The words are the nymphs/aliens if you're vibing in the right frequency as I was when my spirit comp.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

i feel you man...so ...yes you did :) read it again ..very strong emotive poem my friend ...
Very emotion, evoking. Liked how you used the choice arrangement of words to make your point. Great one, thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Captivating
Well written; I enjoy reading your work.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Months Ago


Grammar aside, it's good. Sorry if I'm a stickler, but good job. I felt the tone as I read it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anna Marie

9 Months Ago

You would not use "4" in place of "for." But that is obvious and I'm sure you know that.
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Anna Marie

9 Months Ago

However, I very much enjoyed this poem.
sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Anna.
Once you find peace it sets you free to love and life. Remarkable writing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Thank you Hebe, but peace is settling, I 'm seeking truths.
Hebe

9 Months Ago

By Eckhart Tolle
People don't realize that now is all there ever is. There is no past or fu.. read more
How enchanting to seek paradise where the nymphs gather.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Right? Thank you for reading Shobana.
longing for peace,the mind is very mysterious ,it takes you where it wants to go

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

I love numerology. I use it all the time and see and apply it to everything. I agree with you Ron.
 wordman

9 Months Ago

lol,and every body thought i was just an ole tennessee red neck
sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

And me a ghetto kid from East Los Angeles haha
you're too funny Ron!
find paradise in my mind, clever write. thanks for the sharing of your talent.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

10 Months Ago

Our minds allow us to sub-create from the creation.
Thank you for reading Roxane.

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