Ms. Sadness

Ms. Sadness

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fell in love with

the sadness,

which later,

became my passion.

The black became my friend.

Bested by the

light I was given.

So I caved in,

sorta like a caveman.

Then I died

again when she

glanced in.

I asked myself,

“should we dance

again?”

I couldn’t make up my mind so,

I fell back into the black

and wandered through

Wonders.

And now we’re back here,

falling in love with sadness

again.

So mote it be



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more



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I always tell myself to look for the bright side of feeling sadness. Sadness is always with you, so you will never be alone.

Posted 2 Months Ago


sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

You are so fucken right Kevz.
It has a really beautiful flow though out the piece

Posted 4 Months Ago


I know what it is to have sadness, I don't love it but it's a part of life.. I enjoyed your poem...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

I'm glad that you enjoyed it April.
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mou
all those beautiful green memories leave us with a pale heart..so better to make friendship with sadness..an ultimate reward..you have penned it very beautifully
mou.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Omega reward.
mou

8 Months Ago

you make me blush :)
In chaos sometimes all people have is their emotion. Even sorrow can become a welcome friend. You have given a true persona to that.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

A friend I know all too well...
I've suffered (unfortunately) with mental illness my entire life, so this it very close to home. So "the black" has become my friend quite often. I love how you always put a personal touch to your poetry. It makes it incredibly relatable.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

God bless you Tionge, and stay strong. I'm really glad that you could find something in it and relat.. read more
I relate to this so much... You captured depression in the most beautiful and Shakespearean way... Kudos love... You struck again.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

That's what I do...
Glad you could relate Tiff.
Love is Love.
Sometimes the blackness needs love to lighten its way and good can come from love no matter the colour or place, as long as we don’t get trapped in the dark of sadness forever🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Sadness forever...
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

9 Months Ago

Nothing is the same forever - change is the only thing you can be sure of- joy comes in the morning.. read more
This piece gives me a rolling, thundering Alice in wonder land kinda feel yet darker with more sadness. Good piece


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

So they say...

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