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Ms. Sadness

Ms. Sadness

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fell in love with

the sadness,

which later,

became my passion.

The black became my friend.

Bested by the

light I was given.

So I caved in,

sorta like a caveman.

Then I died

again when she

glanced in.

I asked myself,

“should we dance

again?”

I couldn’t make up my mind so,

I fell back into the black

and wandered through

Wonders.

And now we’re back here,

falling in love with sadness

again.

So mote it be



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more



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I know what it is to have sadness, I don't love it but it's a part of life.. I enjoyed your poem...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

I'm glad that you enjoyed it April.
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mou
all those beautiful green memories leave us with a pale heart..so better to make friendship with sadness..an ultimate reward..you have penned it very beautifully
mou.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Omega reward.
mou

1 Month Ago

you make me blush :)
In chaos sometimes all people have is their emotion. Even sorrow can become a welcome friend. You have given a true persona to that.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

A friend I know all too well...
I've suffered (unfortunately) with mental illness my entire life, so this it very close to home. So "the black" has become my friend quite often. I love how you always put a personal touch to your poetry. It makes it incredibly relatable.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

God bless you Tionge, and stay strong. I'm really glad that you could find something in it and relat.. read more
I relate to this so much... You captured depression in the most beautiful and Shakespearean way... Kudos love... You struck again.....

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

That's what I do...
Glad you could relate Tiff.
Love is Love.
Sometimes the blackness needs love to lighten its way and good can come from love no matter the colour or place, as long as we don’t get trapped in the dark of sadness forever🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Sadness forever...
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

2 Months Ago

Nothing is the same forever - change is the only thing you can be sure of- joy comes in the morning.. read more
This piece gives me a rolling, thundering Alice in wonder land kinda feel yet darker with more sadness. Good piece


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

So they say...
I believe that sadness is what make us good writers.


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Mine is Love.
Wonderful use of words and thoughts. You made the reader believe your words and thoughts. Easy to fall to blackness. A odd safety to it. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and thinking so Sir, always such a pleasure to hear from you my friend.
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome my friend.

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