Ms. Sadness

Ms. Sadness

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fell in love with

the sadness,

which later,

became my passion.

The black became my friend.

Bested by the

light I was given.

So I caved in,

sorta like a caveman.

Then I died

again when she

glanced in.

I asked myself,

“should we dance

again?”

I couldn’t make up my mind so,

I fell back into the black

and wandered through

Wonders.

And now we’re back here,

falling in love with sadness

again.

So mote it be



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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sinNsincerity
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It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more



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The writing style you used truly compliments the vibe you created. Good job dude.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

A style I've grown into and fell inlove with myself. Thank you for reading Rose, I'm glad you liked .. read more
i can really relate to this. fantastic flow and imagery!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Luci, I'm glad that it was relatable.
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Love your flow of writing and the play on words you always sneak in. Dig this one a lot Sin!

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sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you B, I;m really glad that you do. I do my best to give ya'll something tasty.
the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth eh!? ;) very much like your clever word play closing ... the journey through your poem so relatable ...too many times ...back to the cave we go ..loving the sadness ...trying to make sense of it all :( ahhhhhhhhh love! ;}
E.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Gotta make the people love the truth rather than hate it right? Thank you for reading Sir, I'm glad .. read more
"Fell in love with
the sadness,
which later,
became my passion." - First off, I absolutely love how plainly you've written this. It's not only relatable, but very comforting in the way of giving tragedy an identity.

"The black became my friend." - I really like the sudden abruptness of this sentence.

"Bested by the
light I was given." - this is a lovely sentence.

"So I caved in,
sorta like a caveman.
Then I died
again when she
glanced in." - I found it interesting and functional to add a bit of humor, or something representing that it
was attempted. It kind of gives me the image of someone who is heartbroken and trying to laugh it off or make light of their pain.

"I asked myself,
“should we dance
again?”
I couldn’t make up my mind so,
I fell back into the black
and wandered through
Wonders." - I found this absolutely beautiful. Relatable in a way that is hard to put into words and yet very keenly felt.

"And now we’re back here,
falling in love with sadness
again.
So mote it be" - again, you've expressed this in a wonderful way. The idea of falling in love with sadness is something so real and comforting to those who have done so, intentionally or not. The ending makes it a prayer or a spell and all the more bittersweet.

Overall, I loved this piece top to bottom and I think you've done a solid job on getting both your ideas and emotion across. Too often I read poems and simply see them, but I definitely felt this piece. Thank you much for sharing and keep up the good work!

-Rynn

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

A spell indeed. As are all my poems.
Thank you for reading Rynn, I really enjoyed your anal.. read more
The poem is very good. I appreciate that you got into this subject and didn't make it boring. It is short and on the subject.
My favorite lines were:
"Then I died
again when she
glanced in.
I asked myself,
“should we dance
again?”

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"and now were back here
falling in love with sadness"

My favorite lines. Nice poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading Kathrine, I'm really glad that you enjoyed those lines.
You have a way of taking the reader on a ride! I LOVE, LOVE, the emotion in this piece! Your work is where truth combines with reality opening up for all to feel connected in some way to the pieces you write! Well done! I fell in love with sadness before.
Tabby

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading Tabby, always such a pleasure to hear from you. And thank you for thinking so,.. read more
It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more
Heartache :(( this is so sad and deep at the same time. I loved it :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

3 Weeks Ago

Ironically, it is what keep me happy.
Thank you for reading Nora.
Nora

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome :))

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