Ms. Sadness

Ms. Sadness

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fell in love with

the sadness,

which later,

became my passion.

The black became my friend.

Bested by the

light I was given.

So I caved in,

sorta like a caveman.

Then I died

again when she

glanced in.

I asked myself,

“should we dance

again?”

I couldn’t make up my mind so,

I fell back into the black

and wandered through

Wonders.

And now we’re back here,

falling in love with sadness

again.

So mote it be



© 2017 sinNsincerity



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It's hard to have a skill that relies so heavily on trauma, in all of its forms, to produce work that doesn't seem plastic. It's a good piece, I liked it. I think the harder emotions yield beautiful work. Of course, this calls into question the standard of beauty - but, that's a longer post. ^_^

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

I've grown in ways that it's the only way. Trauma is why I began to write, and now it has become my .. read more



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Wonderful use of words and thoughts. You made the reader believe your words and thoughts. Easy to fall to blackness. A odd safety to it. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and thinking so Sir, always such a pleasure to hear from you my friend.
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome my friend.
:'( This is very beautiful in a melancholy type of way. I love the darkness. And while i was reading it, I don't know if you wrote it to be like this, but it was almost like a female rock song. Beautiful

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and thinking so Nyxia. Didn't write it as a song, I jut use a lot of literary .. read more
I agree. I wrote something similar years ago.. something like I allowed sadness (which was a she to me too) to crawl around inside me and I just a dark shroud to protect her... It is so easy to be befriended by sadness and darkness and to let it settle in comfortably.. to allow it to seize us completely.. and dare I say, inspire us artists all the more for it?? It is easier to cozy up to sadness than to defy it and overcome it. This is definitely an honest piece. I like it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

That's pretty awesome Alexa, I too will protect her.
Woe is thee--
where will it end?
Does it continue and grow
with wonder and love...
will the light win?

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

What if I don't want it to end and purposely left the light for love?
I really enjoyed this piece, this flows nicely. enjoyable

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dig it.... I really do...great Job

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you Bri, I really appreciate it.
The writing style you used truly compliments the vibe you created. Good job dude.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

A style I've grown into and fell inlove with myself. Thank you for reading Rose, I'm glad you liked .. read more
Scarlets Rose

8 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing, keep up the good work!
i can really relate to this. fantastic flow and imagery!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you Luci, I'm glad that it was relatable.
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BBP
Love your flow of writing and the play on words you always sneak in. Dig this one a lot Sin!

Posted 11 Months Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you B, I;m really glad that you do. I do my best to give ya'll something tasty.
the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth eh!? ;) very much like your clever word play closing ... the journey through your poem so relatable ...too many times ...back to the cave we go ..loving the sadness ...trying to make sense of it all :( ahhhhhhhhh love! ;}
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Gotta make the people love the truth rather than hate it right? Thank you for reading Sir, I'm glad .. read more

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