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My Crow

A Poem by sinNsincerity

She is spoken poetry.

My sacred rosary.

But she is the one

Who holds on and pr(e)ys on me.

I'm the beauty to her beast.

Such is why my heart is the perfect feast.

Hip check,

Her hips on my neck.

Lips pressed.

Woop, zoop, sloop. . .

Bud, Not Buddy.

But you’re more than that

My lovely.

Now,

Allow me to take your breath.

Winter solstice brings out my best

And I towered the pyramid steps to capture

The heart inside of your chest.

Heka and offerings-

From putty to pottery,

The transformation of the conscious

To the sub lays the forbidden poetry.

This is not blessed,

But a sin fest.

Drunk off of your Witch's brew,

All the while,

Dangling off of your balcony view.

Do you hear my gloom?

I’m calling upon you-

Ms. Moon.

Please accept my sacred voodoo.





© 2018 sinNsincerity



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Thus far, my favorite poem from you. Everything works well in this poem, structure, word choice, flow, etc. As the reader, I get a clear image of a beautiful but manipulative woman, deeply insecure (which is why she doesn't allow anyone as close as the writer wants to be). Frustration and desperation are strong emotions I pick up, and streaks of bitterness (for the rejection, refusal to love, recognize, etc). An enjoyable read, as all good poetry is.

Posted 6 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

I'm glad you had enjoyed it Robert and for thinking so.



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Oh this is just...yum! Lovely trail of words that touches hearts. Very romantic, among many other things, dear author :)

Your fan,
Ana.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I enjoyed this very much. It seem to fall in and out of rhythm, keeping me in my toes. As I expected a sense of one thing, it was mixed up in the middle, and delivered a shock that feels like it surges forward.
As for the perspective, it felt like a refreshing look from the other side. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

And that my barefoot empress, is exactly what I set out to do. To keep you on your toes. The art of .. read more
The thing I love the best about your poem is ORIGINALITY! This is so unusual, yet it sparks familiar feelings & ideas, all along the way. It’s so refreshing to read about a love/romance/sensual encounter without a single line being written in the typical over-used ways. This is a surprise the whole way, which is a hallmark of the best writing. Your references are subtle yet recognizable, which I like becuz I’m not that good at understanding nuanced writing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Thank you, I really appreciate that Margie. That is the job of the writer. So many before have alrea.. read more
Nicely done! I like the way you described the beauty in this poem... The descriptive words kept my attention..

Posted 3 Months Ago


I enjoyed reading this. So beautifully expressed. I admit I had to read it a few times to get the whole message. Lol. I love everything about it!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

4 Months Ago

That's what it's all about! I'm glad you had enjoyed it Jennifer.
I got a new favorite poem of yours. Love it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

Thank you Donika, that means a lot.
Much Love!
Your words are immersive and help me to stick around for the message.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

5 Months Ago

That is one aspect of the goal. Thank you for sticking around.
The imagery in this captured by the metaphors you use is just beautiful. My favorite line is "I'm the beauty to her beast.
Such is why my heart is the perfect feast."

The intense imagery there in those lines is just so powerful. I can actually envision this manipulative woman as a sort of beast that tears away anything pure and good from you. Such a great metaphor. I read through it twice because it has so much great depth and detail. I can't wait to read more of your material.

Posted 5 Months Ago


"She is spoken poetry
My sacred rosary..."

David, these two brief lines spoke volumes to me...and I simply had to tell you so!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

And that makes it all worth it.
Thank you for reading Kelly, I'm delighted to hear that. Hol.. read more
Such powerful words and the flow is sublime. It's a pleasure to read such beautiful poetry
:) Julie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

Thank you Julie, the pleasure is all mine. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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