The Deathless

An imaginary war cry for an imaginary mercenary group called The Deathless

We Are The Deathless

 

The masters of the best heroes have foretold

Of a Legend forgotten and old

Of black hearts so cold

They would be more valuable than any price of gold

 

We are that legend. We are The Deathless

 

When the strongest of players run in fear

When the legions of our warriors cry and cheer

Wearing and using only the finest of weapons and gear

At your demise it will take no seer

 

To see we are the strongest. We are The Deathless

 

To be brave enough to struggle through any fight

To have the inner strength and pride to show you our might

To defeat any enemy that is in our sight

Yet still fight our dark sides and do only what is right

 

We are the noble paladins of light. We are The Deathless

 

To rush onward to victory in every single battle

To slaughter all of our enemies just like cattle

Riding our pets onward as we fight on like cavalry in a saddle

For it is the bones of your allies and comrades we rattle

 

We are unbroken warriors without fear. We are The Deathless

 

On the wings of pegasus we shall ride the wind and fly

With the ability and courage to fight any being that might look us in the eye

You know the carnage has begun as soon as you hear our cry

Because after all, you cannot kill what cannot die

 

We are The Deathless. AND WE WILL NEVER DIE

Author's Note

Be honest. I can take the criticism. And if you have the time, feel free to criticize more of my work. It would be appreciated


I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique; (They would be more valuable than an price of gold) than any price of gold

Review: Nice rhyme scheme and your word choices are all true rhymes, the flow meter is smooth and consistent and the whole poem has great continuity. Masterfully written and shows you are a talented and creative writer and it was a pleasure to read, I want to thank Emily for sending me the read request for this poem. Standing Ovation! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

Thanks bear, I'm happy you liked it.

[Emily]

Lovely wording!!
Keep it up!!

[R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)]

thank you! ^__^