Father's Day Poem

I wrote this for my dad. I hope he likes it!

When I look at you,

I am reminded of home,

 

When you smile,

 It reminds me of laughter and happy days

 

When you take me places, or play sports with me

I’m reminded that it feels good to stop being a couch potato sometimes

 

When you tell me to do work

I’m reminded of how I could be spending my time playing videogames instead

 

But on Father’s Day or not,

I don’t need to be reminded that I’m your son.

 

Happy Father’s Day Dad! 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think, but don't sugar coat it please.



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Reviews

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Sini...... ok, I won't coat sugar. This poem is impact of million voices. You know there are so many people who forgot to wish their father on father's day and many wants but things are already too late for them......
But you did!!
I don't know how much your father is proud of you but 1000% sure you're proud of him beyond most proud.
Again I didn't coat sugar, wrote what I felt.😊