I'll Never See You Again

Just a poem about an old friend. I didn't put much effort into this, but I hope you like it.

I’m dreaming of a day

Where it won’t have to rain

A day where you stayed

And I don’t have to feel this pain

 

You’re the stain that coloured my existence

The friend that made life meaningful

The buffer zone, between me and the world, the resistance

I promised to pay you back in full

 

I guess that was bull

Because after the time was over and the day was done

And I saw the morning sun

You had already run from our prison without me

 

Leaving me alone

Resolve as cold as stone crumbled without seeing your face, your friendship

Never thought you’d be the one to end this and leave me there in disgrace

I don’t even know if our bond was real, and I don’t know what to feel

 

You left me in a cold hospital for another 8 months

You never visited

It was a cold punch

Did you really hate me that much? Leaving me to finish this?

 

You knew I needed you, and I was there for you, you know it’s true

But you were too cool to do me any respect for the help I gave you

Gone without a care, I thought you’d always be there

I’ve been alone for 5 years since you left and I’ve done my best

I didn’t need your help anyway

 

I guess we can’t continue to be friends

And I’ll never see you again

Author's Note

I very seldom reply to reviews, but I promise I read EVERY single one. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be ecstatic to have the chance to hear what you have to say. Whenever you write something about my poems, or the themes of my poems, or criticize me it is not in vain. I will listen, learn and be thankful.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entering into this c ompetition of mine, i think ive read this before but especially now love the 2nd verse, excellent, heart wrenching stuff i love the way you wrote, this, thanks

[Najam Us Saher]

So emotional and heart touching. You have expressed your feelings very well.