A Painful Break Up

A Got hungry and wrote this haha

Oh Dorritos locos tacos,

You taunt me with flavor.

With your crisp crunch,

And cheese to savor.

Oh how you mish and mash,

Yet your flavors combine.

You make me crave you,

A heavenly taste sublime.

Your price is affordable,

Even for such as I.

Drawing crowds of all kinds,

Not just average guys.

Alas you have lied to me,

Claimed to be real.

You say you are Mexican,

But the truth is concealed.

You are a gringo!

A impostor in disguise!

Show me the real food,

Or kiss my money goodbye.

Your pictures lie to me!

They play you up!

Showing contents overflowing!

Yet its only a fourth a cup!?

You have deceived me,

And broken my trust.

This cuts deep,

Thus the big fuss!

Why cant you be,

Just what you claim.

If you just were,

My order would remain.

We are through,

You and I.

You will hurt me no more.

This is Goodbye.

Author's Note

Just got bored and hungry haha and i hate how the advertisements for food is..

Reviews

[Prritiy]

:) engaging piece of work and yes it does bring out smile. liked it .

[Frieda P]

Sounds like you had a bad case of the munchies and got an entertaining write out of it, very clever, abhor false advertising too, tacos, I meant kudos!

[Sir Joseph]

Thanks! haha also sorry i havent read any of your r/r yet... i havent been able to get on in a while and i have 62 of them now..

[Frieda P]

Ha tell me about it, I have been on and I've got upward of 70, no problemo! Not going anywhere, and my pleasure. :-)

[Sir Joseph]

Okie dokie! :)

[iliOZ]

add a little salsa, a shot of tequila and couple of xx and i am game
otherwise i agree, cute poem

[Emily Feret]

HAHAHA! What a fun poem. It is sort of like a bag of chips really, it's like thank you for selling me a bag that is 85% air.

[Sir Joseph]

Thanks :) haha i know right?! Im like are you serious??

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hmm i am craving for tacos love this poem it is vibrant and quirky love it!

[Sir Joseph]

Thanks! haha i got hungry and saw a taco bell commercial so yeah haha

[Marie]

Now you've made me hungry.
I don't believe advertisements...they are geared only for manipulation...

[Sir Joseph]

Haha I'm sorry! Yeah, they are a real let down.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha food always seems to look better on advertisements than in real life...it is a disappointment at times, but fast food isn't good for you anyway xD just make your own taco and all is well...solves boredom and hunger unless the person is lazy lol

Good Job :p

[Sir Joseph]

well then lol :P

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lol i win? xD

[Sir Joseph]

nope lol :P

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

psh :P I think I do

[Sir Joseph]

nope nope nopers lol :P

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

yep yep yeppers lol :D

[Sir Joseph]

Lies!! lol

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha nooooo

[Sir Joseph]

Yeeeessssss lol

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

xD NUUUUUU

[StayAnchored]

Haha! That is amazing :'D!!
You made me hungry lol

[Sir Joseph]

Mwahahaha!! im making everybody hungry lol thanks :)

[StayAnchored]

You're welcome... i think :P

[Sir Joseph]

lol yep yep yeppers :P

[StayAnchored]

What is your most favorite food every!? :)

[Sir Joseph]

Hmmmm Idk!?!?! lol im a fatty mcfatt fat lol or well i eat like one lol

[StayAnchored]

haha! It is a hard question! I eat like I'm fat yet I never gain weight... its weird lol

read morehaha! It is a hard question! I eat like I'm fat yet I never gain weight... its weird lol

[Sir Joseph]

I feel your pain lol i try to gain weight ha but between my high metabolism and me constantly doing manual labor.. i dont gain weight ha

[StayAnchored]

Yep! It gets annoying cause I need to gain(or so they say) :P

[Sir Joseph]

i know! lol but the funny thing is even though im skinny i am stronger than alot of guys bigger than me lol dont know how haha :P

[StayAnchored]

Haha! I wish I was strong lol :)

[Sir Joseph]

haha :P

[Sir Joseph]

lol

[marie]

lol:) still laughing:) loved the piece:) its very amusing:) great job sweety:)

[Sir Joseph]

You probably will be the most amused because you know how i would say it lol and meh expressions haha thank you :)

[marie]

yeah:) i still have this big goofy grin on my face:)lol

[Sir Joseph]

Hee hee hee :)

[marie]

:)

[Holly Mason]

aahhh don't say good bye at least not until you try the new cool ranch doritos loco tacos*)*)*) they to skimp on the good stuff
this is very cute but now you made me hungry with or without all the good stuff
and yes the advertisements take us for a ride but so do poem titles*)*)
thank you so for sharing your creative and fun to read write

[Sir Joseph]

I thought it would be a nice and funny little title lol but the picture gives it away lol well the problem is.. im actually mexican or well part and i know good mexican food when i see and taste it lol the doritos tacos are ehh ok hahah just wish they had more meat and cheese haha and thank you for the review :)