Rainy Evening

Rainy Evening

A Poem by Enigma
"

Well, it's raining here right now

"

It's raining...

On my body

On my soul

It feels good

So peaceful

So pure

It's evening

And I see the rainbow in the sky

And some excited birds flying by

It's a feeling

A deep feeling in my heart

It's there from the start

It has stopped raining

But I still feel it on my skin

And on my soul...

Coz' some feelings tend to last longer...

© 2008 Enigma


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Beautifully written! Excellent job. And so very true...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very poetic write! A little bit romantic and melancholic ...

Me too I like it when it rains ...

You are starting to become a real poet! Keep it up!

An lovely, and image provoking poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice expression :) great way to express yourself too :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its amazing! It's a beautiful expression of feelings and I appreciate how you've penned your thoughts down in a poetic way!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the use of repetition for strength and the theme... It's a good write, keep up the work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it!!!
It's so beautiful & u express this feeling,emotion perfectly!!
Good write!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write- this peice is filled with emotions & it is the very kinda poem that every soul can relate! Great job B.P.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the feeling of rain on my skin, its great.
Lovely write!! I loved it ^_^

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol! lovely piece piece you have here siya. this is what i call free-stlying, the fonds and the flow- simple and cool. the last line no doubt excellently did justice to the poem. well penned, thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a very good piece! thank you for sharing it with me!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 4, 2008

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