Muted

Muted

A Poem by Sarah Morgan
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Another Song I wrote :)

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"Muted Out Loud" By Sarah (McCleese) Morgan


The road I travel now is dark
Don't know where to stop, Don't know where to start
Each passing day is when I become colder
The sun it shines through this broken house
I cannot stand these feelings now
How can I be 21 yet feel so older

 

 

Take a deep breath in they say it gets easier
I'm in so deep and it just keeps getting deeper

 

(Course)

I wish I could push it all away
Look at myself in the mirror
Turn the page, see if things get a little clearer
Id stop what I'm doing if only I could
If things would get better even if I did what I should
I'm just now starting to figure out
There's no easy way out
I wanna scream, I wanna shout
I'm just muted out loud

 

 

When I was young id mask the pain by putting on my headphones
Now it doesn't help at all and I'm all alone
People say there here for me, funny it doesn't seem so
I try to get over it, but the past keeps telling me no, no, no

 

 

Take a deep breath in they say it gets a little easier
I'm in so deep and it just keeps getting deeper

 

 

I wish I could push it all away
Look at myself in the mirror
Turn the page, see if things get clearer
Id stop what I'm doing if only I could
If things would get better even if I did what I should
I'm just starting to figure out
There's no easy way out
I wanna scream, I wanna shout
I'm just muted out loud


© 2011 Sarah Morgan



Author's Note

Sarah Morgan
This song to you may not be that interesting, but "Muted Out Loud" means if you've ever been told to just shut-up, keep quite. If you've ever just wanted to scream and you couldn't. Time moves so slow and the people you want to care just don't.. that is my message.

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I can completely relate to this feeling. All the times when the silence is enforced upon you, its too unjust, feels so darn unfair. The song, by the way, was very intesreting. I loved the way different lines rhymed, I'm a huge fan of rhymes. And the message you wanted to convey, about being muted out, was beautifully put forth. Loved the chorus. Loved it all. Great write. :)
P.S. - Just go through it again. Few minor errors in typing that I think, should be corrected.

Posted 6 Years Ago


there is a trace of strength in this piece filled with sadness that your writing style and word choice brings out. excellent write while so very hard for me personally to read.

p.s.
There's no easy way out
I wanna scream, I wanna shout
I'm just muted out loud

wonderfully strong ending!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


there is a trace of strength in this piece filled with sadness that your writing style and word choice brings out. excellent write while so very hard for me personally to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


"Take a deep breath in they say it gets a little easier
I'm in so deep and it just keeps getting deeper"

Magnificent! The poem has a philosophy. Muted out loud. The words are felicitous with the theme. You have a penchant for expressing your angst through your words. Loved it very much!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on March 29, 2011
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Hey, my name as Sarah in case you hadn't seen the display so boldly on the page plastered everywhere. I'm 23 and I've been letting my feelings out through writing for a long time. I don't remember exa.. more..

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