Who Says?

Who Says?

A Poem by Dreamer
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Basically a bunch of questions I ask myself..

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Who says?...

That I can't break free from who I used to be?

That I can't change the world?

That I can't get stoned?

That I can't be paranoid?

That I can't live without you?

That i can't scream at the top of my lungs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do they know?

I'll show them all,

because I can do whatever I want...just watch me.


© 2013 Dreamer



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Nice. I like this poem. I believe we limit ourselves in all things. A fearless person can make many mistakes. At least you had lived. Honest and direct words. My kind of poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

you're welcome! and thank you for such a great review (:



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I can relate to this, this was powerful and beautiful (:

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BubblingMe

3 Years Ago

I add it to my favorites :D
Dreamer

3 Years Ago

awesome :D
BubblingMe

3 Years Ago

Haha no problem!:)
Nice. I like this poem. I believe we limit ourselves in all things. A fearless person can make many mistakes. At least you had lived. Honest and direct words. My kind of poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

you're welcome! and thank you for such a great review (:
Be you, aslong as you know the difference
between right and wrong. Follow your heart
great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review
Great a battle cry. Be yourself that is the best you can ever be.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Why thank you (:
Patrick O'Neil

4 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
Dreamer

4 Years Ago

I appreciate it greatly
Great stuff! Emotional and honest. Fantastic!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I appreciate it (:
Loved it. I remember feeling like that in my late teenage years, well done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jake!
inspirational type of writing, you can do anything id you set your mind to it! great write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! (:
Quiet Child

4 Years Ago

welcome kiddo! (:
Dreamer

4 Years Ago

:D.............
Look out world, here you come! :) Very empowering words. Good one. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

Why thank you very much! I appreciate you reading it and taking the time to review it.
I got your back be sure of that. You are breathing fire. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

4 Years Ago

thank you pete!

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Dreamer
Dreamer

Jackson, OH



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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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