Can't help myself

 

 

I shouldn't feel this way,

not after the way you hurt me and tore me in two....

but I can't help myself..,

in loving you <3

 

Reviews

[dw817]

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Reminds me of Sharon back from 3rd grade. I never did find out who she was, not really. And although she was mean and cruel to me, she always held my hand while she did it, and that meant more to me than anything else in the world at the time.

So sorry you were hurt. The problem with 'opening up' is it lowers the normal defenses we have, and leaves our heart 'open' to injury. We TRUST others, and when that trust is betrayed is when it can hurt the most.

Hang in there, Dreamer ... :)
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[Dreamer]

thanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot.
I'm hanging in there the best I can...
read morethanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot.
I'm hanging in there the best I can...

what's the link on your review?

[dw817]

Oof. You hit the "read more" error in Writer's Cafe. It's always a good idea to re-load the page and see if your entire message was sent, if not, you can either delete your previous post and try again making sure not to use the ":" in your text, or - just add text beneath it.

While I am immensely fond of Writer's Cafe and it's interface, the few simple questions I have asked staff truly remain unanswered to this day - so I can only offer kludges to get around their glitches.

[Dreamer]

oops I seen that...thanks for the suggestion.

[Talal Hussain]

That is a wonderful composition Katie...i hope everything turns out just fine :-)

[Dreamer]

thank you very much Talal, I appreciate it (: I hope so too...

[Lydia Shutter]

It's impossible to turn off an emotion that insists it is real....trying to stop it is a futile action! Well written and honest. Lydi**

[Dreamer]

thank you very much, i appreciate your review (:

[beautiful dreamer]

it IS cold in here my gosh!! sorry i was speak typing! hope that cheered you up a little lol. i know this feeling...don't worry it wont last forever hopefully, cuz it really sucks! i like the rhyme scheme in here too very good poem!

[Dreamer]

indeed it does, thanks (:

[beautiful dreamer]

you are welcome!

[Dreamer]

i appreciate your reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

i'm happy to give them fellow dreamer

[Sami Khalil]

I'm so sorry you feel this way . I hope things will turn out better...Keep the dream alive...:)

[Dreamer]

thanks Sami, i appreciate it!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........

[Dreamer]

...........(:

[OTownPete]

If he doesn't get the message from this he's just thick! Your friend in words, Pete

[Dreamer]

thanks Pete! yeah, the thing is he won't get the message from it because he won't ever see it.

[OTownPete]

Oh, so this is more like a Dear Diary kind of thing!

[Dreamer]

in a way i guess you could say that. He won't ever see it though because we are not even allowed to speak to each other.