Virgo

A love story

Virgo

I first saw your emerald eyes in the middle of an eclipse

The sun bled over the dusk and dripped on your skin,

Falling align with everything I ever considered to be perfect. 

Entranced with visual stimulants and heavy convulsions, 

We should have stopped and talked about the end of the world. 

Your hair swept through the bashful skyline,

Embarrassed from the over bearing disappointment of loveless people, 

All of them overly demanding and all of then so fickle. 

My unconscious self is saturated by viral indulgence, 

Compassion has been soaked through mitosis 

Easily replicated into carbon copies 

And easily distributed through gritty haze. 

But you're different. 

For some reason I don't feel so afraid when I'm around you

Even when your emerald eyes trickle into a shade of blue

I still invest my immense faith into your piercing aurora. 

I know that we are all going to die soon

The sky is falling and the planet is fading in transcendence. 

But at least now I found somebody to die with.

Reviews

[eeoopig]

I loved this and the story that goes with it. beautiful

[Barbara Walker]

It's hell going through many things alone, but I think the end of the world is one time you definitely want company.

[Pax]

a nice tale, i really thought this is about virgo in astrology yet its just a name. i like it. good job.

[~LadyWolf~]

Very beautiful Cole ~ I like the song to :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this tale. I like the strong description and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

[MOON]

Lovely write love the last line.

[Olivia Marie]

Amazing, great imagery. Loved it :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Stunning....beautifully written and the thought of having a love like that is inspiring :) Great piece !!

[sienikeha]

RH really suits the tone of this. sobering.
i like this image ::bashful skyline

[That_Girl]

Brilliant! Your poetry is... outstanding and your vocabulary is strong. Another job well done.