Colors and shades...

Colors and shades...

A Poem by LadyInk

Colors and shades

mixed in a haze

screaming my name

in hopes to amaze

 

to send me in wonder

confused and in stuper

changing the days

rewriting the numbers

and adding them up

 

breaking down the wall

watching the ruins fall

 

My world tumbled down

it was torn apart

drawing a frown

on top of my heart

 

The colors and shades

mixed in a haze

changed everything

left me with nothing

 

Rainbows

Black and white

dark crows

absent light

 

Colors and shades

mixed in a haze

grieving the past

everlasting last.

 

 

 

© 2013 LadyInk


Author's Note

LadyInk
Wrote this in class today... any comments? Anything goes!

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You just wrote it in class? Haha, wow, nice one! I'd say if you spent a bit more time on it you could make it great, it just seems a bit vague, but either way, it's interesting :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


LadyInk

11 Years Ago

:) thankyou!

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LadyInk
LadyInk

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