Torn

Torn

 

Everyone hates you

But you don’t care

Inside your torn with small pieces of the sun’s air

You can’t see it

But I’m a little jealous

You get all you like

I get everything I hate

While I’m all torn inside

While your thinking about

Your grace

Reviews

[Goodbye]

This is a little more creative....better.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like your writing style, because it's different than what I've read on here. Great write.