Feelings

Our Heart is a mess

Hearts are a racket

It hurts so much When it comes to love.

 

People Don't think about others

But themselves

You hurt so much When i think of you.

 

Is hard to be

Is hard to think

Don't trust me cause me feelings shift

Author's Note

I just write on of what i see or feel. I hope you like it.

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is good. Writing about things you see or feel, is a good way to prevent writers block. (: Great write.

[Linear]

Love hurts, only when it's not me last, it hurts to wait for the right one

[sarah]

this is really a great poem! good work

[Sarah Jane]

It's simple yet extreamly meaningful and relatable. I feel like this all the time. I can't stand it but I do. And I'm not one for being emotional, but all of your poetry bring it out in me. Keep writing :)

[Goodbye]

It does feel that way sometimes...thank goodness not ALL the time!

[Shelly Braen]

This is very good. ^_^
It has a simplicity tat drives the impact of each word strongly and clearly. This piece is very truthful and open, I like this a lot.

[Caitlynxoxo]

lol i do the same, write what i feel and see :P Nice poem! My favourite line:

"It hurts so much When it comes to love."

^^ So true!! :) Thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo