Love you

I love you even

when your gone

 

The blood in my heart

is like a fire in an attack

 

I feel the same way

everyday

 

Your in my dreams

and the savior in my

nightmares

 

I love you at night

I love you in the day

 

I'll tell you that I'll

be gone when you come back

 

I love you but I

Havent forgiven you

 

My blood burns

while yours flows

My heart used to glow

But now it broke.

Author's Note

Enjoy. Hope you like it.

Reviews

[Sarah Jane]

I like how the poem flows. I love the ending, very unexpected and so true, good write:)

[Mr.Six]

I loved the ending, i didnt expect it! i liked it very much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the movement and the story in the poem. Love make us want to live and die. Complete poem was very good. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

I love the layout. Sweet poem.

[Caitlynxoxo]

absolutely amazing description in this poem! i couldn't stop the reading the entire time; your words kept pulling me in :) only mistakes i found were that "your" should have been "you're" sometimes, but other than that minor aspect, i really, really loved this!! It was fantastic! thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Linear]

Love can be so sad cant it ? nice poem

[sarah]

Wow this is truly an amazing poem really says a lot and it bursts with emotion great work!

[Shawn Killian]

i LOVE YOUr writing. Very straightforward yet kinda cryptic. amazing