Together

Together

A Poem by Sunny Skye

I'm leaving now but

 i will always be with you

I have always loved you

I have always been yours

 

Love is something

you don't lett go

 

So, i will always keep you

Deep down in my heart

 

Everything started as a game

and ended as true love

You are my best friend

My only love

My brother

and soul

 

I would've stayed

but i had no choice

I will always remember you

I will always be with you

I will be there when you need me

I will call when you want to hear me

I will chat when you want to see me

And i'll dream when i want a fantasy

of you and me

soulmates against the world.

 

Just as we started we finished

And i just want to let you know

Everything is okay.

 

© 2012 Sunny Skye


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This was a powerful piece. We all have to make tough decisions and leaving people we truly love and care about is, unfortunately, common. Sometimes by naivete or because things came up and they had no choice. It happen. A few grammatical errors but it didn't mess with the meaning of the poem. J'adore! -Ian

Posted 10 Years Ago


Touching and beautiful. Positive, however I feel the lost, somehow... your words are a really mesmerizing ramble of devotion to your soulmate... Lovely work

Posted 12 Years Ago


greatly expressive, i like where you took this

end of stanza two "lett"
some parts are rather cliche. try and stand by the rule that if you've heard it before, don't use it again. now, rules are meant to be broken, but they're still important. your phrasings like "started as a game" and "deep down in my heart" are very overused and played out.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A positive and beautiful poem of love. Good to express love and thankfulness. Two people need luck and kindness to survive today. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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