Separate yourself from this circus

Undo those celestial chords

tying you to this listless life

Join that recurring breeze

calling your name so gently

Loosen those stubborn tent pegs

Get this show onto a new road

Where multiple voices

will forever be stilled

and the audience need not understand

the enigma of your punchlines

where laughter

and cries

mean the same thing

and if nobody shows up

that's okay too - 

life, 

and death

can both be

a monologue.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Very artistic piece ..................

[CherieLamour]

Love the thoughts you have portrayed through oppositional comparisons - laughter and cries, life and death... adds to the dilemma of the whole monologue.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Masterfully crafted and rendered.

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome writ! I love your thoughts, creativity and the formatting you used. Great job!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Aaron.......sometimes we need a crazy circus to inspire, right? ;)

[AaronFreitas]

Of course :)

[FateDictates]

love this!! uh hum nice touch with that change of spacing and size of fonts, amazing what it can offer to your work and implications...high five curtsy bow..

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you very much.......I am often too impatient to consider simple and basic tools to add that little touch to a creation......i should do this more often....:). ......I thought that the surreal angle would catch your eye.....:)

[FateDictates]

alas simply a sad attempt to try make my work seem more interesting sigh..