Empty

My soul

Was grand

Then your words pierced it

I started losing air

Maybe I needed to

But you let me deflate

Until there was nothing left.

Reviews

[V]

Your font matches the message. I like the image of losing air like a balloon until you're empty. Short, nice poem.

[SleeplessVolcano]

I was reading some poems on WC when I discovered a new font in someone's writing....Trebuchet MS....and it spawned this poem....lol.....I call this "font inspiration"....:)