Blown into the water ~ senryu

Blown into the water ~ senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano




Your riptide of words
Churned our love's undercurrent
We're taking water

© 2017 SleeplessVolcano


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To Love
Is to be tested
Like the uncanny waves of seas to come
The ships that pass through with those two passengers on board are the only ones that have stood the test of truth
That love was really genuine for all it stood for and all it would become.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words
Very expressive and creative write! This is my style of writing – loved it! :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much......I never really liked any "form" poetry, i.e. rhyming, or keeping to any gui.. read more

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