An out of the box touchdown - senryu

An out of the box touchdown - senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

I'm in your end zone
Can you see my outstretched arms?
Please pass me your heart.

© 2017 SleeplessVolcano



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Excellent use of metaphor in a flowing senryu!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lol
That is so cute

Love the football references lol

Posted 11 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

11 Months Ago

Maybe I'be been watching too many American football movies.....lol......maybe I should rather watch .. read more
Lingering Soul

10 Months Ago

Nooooo lol
A fine football metaphor. I enjoyed the poem even if I'm not allowed to enjoy the game any longer.

Posted 11 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

11 Months Ago

Thank you. Surely you can enjoy the game from the side-lines?
Fabian G. Franklin

11 Months Ago

The politics and protests have ruined it for me. It's a billionaires game played by millionaires com.. read more
oh i love this highly sentimental journey in senryu form ... in your second line i sense and imagine all the long journey it was to get there ..shy hellos, small significant gifts maybe ..a malt at the drug store (use to have them) ;)
i'm in the end zone..pass me your heart ..love this sir .. it is a classic keeper for sure!
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

between Middle Earth and Atlantis ..mwahvelous my friend simply mwahvelous ... i never was much of a.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

11 Months Ago

Growing in stature gives us a few inches, right? ;). Our gray hair must attest to something I hope :.. read more
Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

ahahahha YES ...i am sure it does my friend! :)))))

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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