A love-smudged image of you

I think I colored outside the lines

a little bit too much

I wonder if I smudged the line

of where I ended

and where you began

But is that so bad?

I always knew

that you were much closer

than a mere embrace

I always knew 

that your thoughts ricocheted

inside my head too

I thought I painted

a picture of your soul

but instead

I now see

my own reflection - 

your warm gaze

piercing through that place

where hearts collide

forever.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Aww...its beautiful... Reminds me of hallmark cards heheh :)

[Zahra]

I thought I painted
a picture of your soul
but instead
I now see
my own reflection -

This is so beautiful.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Zahra - glad you liked it.

[Mika Franolich]

Very interesting. I like this concept you wrote about, someone becoming someone they aren't so they're no longer certain of who they ever were. I like a lot of the lines you used, especially in the beginning. It could use a little work, but otherwise, phenomenal concept and execution :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank for your kind review. You are right, I should edit a bit, but most of my writing is spur-of-the-moment expressions, and I am too lazy to edit afterwards.....yeah, a bad excuse. Creativity can be rebellious too...:P

[Mika Franolich]

Good enough of an excuse as any! Lol.