Silent words

Silent words

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

She slammed the door
Of the chat room
So hard
That my words crashed
Like old software
And I was left speechless
In a place
Where words live
And breathe
And are born
Each second
In silence I sat
And read excited words of others
While I just existed
And simmered in the juices
Of my unspoken words

© 2018 SleeplessVolcano



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Well said. Really beautiful. I'm a girl with few words myself so i could relate. Well done :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Months Ago

Thank you for reviewing. I've found that less is often more....and it applies to words too....:)
Maybe possible the chat room door was damaged....
or maybe it was the door of your heart... you heard..



Posted 9 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Months Ago

who knows - sometimes we hear not what is truly there, but what we want to hear....

T.. read more
the poem about chat rooms and your experience makes it a good poem there is the natural flow of words written and clarity of the message of the poem.

Posted 9 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Months Ago

tx sette for your kind comments.
ahahaha speak up or shut up eh!? ;) i like this very much...so many tangents i am streaking down between your lines..the cadence was so natural for me to connect with ... oh how those chats rooms can explode, implode and turn to rend in a flash!!!!! you are braver than i to tread there Sleepless!
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Months Ago

hehe......sometimes these places where angels fear to tread.....:) Maybe brave is not the right wo.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

:) ......one hopes so my friend

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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