New moon love

New moon love

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

The moon is rising
Eclipsing our stubborn hearts
 Let’s be full again




© 2018 SleeplessVolcano



Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
Just watched the lunar eclipse......food for thought and poetry...:)

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I'm a moonchild, so I've been waiting for these two back-to-back blue moons (Jan & March) for months! I love lunar phenomena. You've done a stellar job of making this brief homage a delightful play on words. The earthly sentiments shine as brightly as the full moon last night! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


What an appropriately magical three lines - persuasive, alluring. And, of course, the picture is perfect. Tis as if if moon-love is coming into view, blushing excited at the peak of its ardour! .

Was beautiful here in UK.. hardly a streetlight where i live.. the moon was greeny-red then red-ish green .. absolutely beautiful. Now you need set fire to your three lines and watch currents of air swift them up space.. a love letter by proxy!

Posted 3 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) My Wikipedia addiction taught me this week the scientific reason.. read more
emmajoy

3 Months Ago

As long as you wanted to see, tried to see, certainly explored the whys and what have yous.. you mor.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

3 Months Ago

Lol.....there is a secret......just be there where rainbows tend to be.....once you actively stop lo.. read more
I got away from Haikus but yours reminds me of how the few
can touch so much and leave impressions and footprints as well.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

3 Months Ago

Thank you kindly for your comment.

This one I'd call a senryu. Despite the fact that.. read more
Perdition

3 Months Ago

No. I very much appreciate that..I did know this but as it has been years since I have visited this .. read more
beautiful haiku, I like the last like, lets be full again. something to think about.

Posted 3 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

3 Months Ago

Thank you Sarah....finding fullness....one thought at a time....

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