Come walk with me

Come walk with me

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

You missed my smile 
this morning
Hope you feel 
my gentle hug
at noon
Tonight,
let's go for a walk
under the moon.


© 2018 SleeplessVolcano



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Wonderful and worthwhile words. These are the words we need to hear. A walk under the moon with good company. Paradise for the lucky. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


In just 8 lines you gave hope, affection, and promised romance; that is excellent writing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Months Ago

I'm practicing for a novel ;) Maybe if I add a few thousand 8-liners together, it might work....:)<.. read more
such a romantic poem in a romantic setting with the person you love most, what more can you ask for?

Posted 6 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your review :) Easier said than done though.....the busy-ness of life often causes th.. read more
sette

6 Months Ago

but still there is the longing for that romance that one day might surprise you

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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