One way love

One way love

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano


Her little hand-scribbled notes
morphed, gradually
into love letters
After so many
"Wish you were heres"
and
"Missing yous"
An initial haphazard script
smoothed out into
a labor of love
Thoughts and ideas
undulating through
cursive brilliance
Just a pity - 
possibly,
that while my mail box was brimming
hers echoed
my empty
heart.

© 2018 SleeplessVolcano



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perfect title ..well said ...the bottle on the beach makes me think of sailors and all those loves left in distant harbors and romantic islands ;)
i relate to this volcano...as the one way lover and said those two lines oh so many times ... it is a miracle that we remain friends .. i think she must have about got sick hearing it from me ... so very hard to let go of that love and dream ...oh well ;) very clever closing sir ...
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


dear Sleepless... our thoughts drift on the ocean of dreams... love begotten but not forgotten... the edges of eternity will always be in our heart and soul. Beautiful poetry. truly, Pat

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mmm good that she did not send a letter in bottle it may take another 132 yrs to reach...
The poem is beautiful so is the bottle with the letter...

Posted 6 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Months Ago

lol...didn't you know that I'm immortal? But I'm sure that the sea currents would have worked again.. read more
Ardra

6 Months Ago

You immortal...when did that happen... I was not invited for the ceremony... lol
I think the .. read more
Great! Actually the photo captured my eyes the most! But this piece is lively connected to it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Months Ago

Was inspired by....wait for it......a news broadcast! They discovered the oldest message in a bottl.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

6 Months Ago

Which age it was? let it be......
We should care today. No?

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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