You don't have to do a thing

You don’t have to do a thing

Just sit with me

And let my hand rest in yours

If you want to

You could be the shepherd

To my sheep-like thoughts -

They know the sound

Of your voice by now

If you want to

You could disarm those landmines

Planted around my heart

For I know

My own hand will just tremble

If you want to

You could wipe my brow

Where history caught up

With my pressure-loving skin

But most of all

You don’t have to do a thing

Just sit with me

And let my hand rest in yours

Reviews

[Neville]

These are beautifully crafted words indeed, and read both like a plea and a prayer...I know I would have been very proud if they were mine..... Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no expectations makes for the most comfortable and lasting relationships...as soon as we expect certain behavior we are ringed with disappointment and heartache.
j.

[barleygirl]

Your message is what I wish to teach those people who try to fix other people going thru tough situations. Many times, a person feeling “down” needs exactly what you’re describing with good details & simplicity. Such a vignette is a teaching tool for how to be a true friend. It doesn’t feel very good when the other person keeps trying to fix me (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Laurierose]

Very spiritual. To place someone so highly in your thoughts is pretty endearing. This person is essentially a savior who holds strings to your heart. With one pull, your world could shatter. With one whisper, your haven is found. To have such a connection with someone so soul deep is fortunate. Great read.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Laurie.....yeah, I guess it had a spiritual dimension to it......glad you picked it up. Yes, indeed...a soulmate is priceless

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This reads like a prayer. But it is definitely a beautiful sentiment desiring comfort and understanding. What do any of us want more than someone to comfort, accept and understand us except maybe someone to forgive us when we find it difficult to forgive ourselves? An interesting and thought provoking write.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Fabian.....the value of unconditional love.....now that is an idea for another poem....or ten....:)

[Ardra]

Mmm can landmines of heart be disarmed...
You are asking her to risk her life ..
Aren't You?