The management of love ~ Senryu

The management of love ~ Senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

love needs order too ~
a few checks and balances:
realigning hearts.


© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


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For my peace of mind love needs order in it. I hate that feeling of being out of control, guess I'm a bit of a control freak. So yes, some tweaking necessary. Love that misty image you have posted which matches your lines so well.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Oh it does. Whether you believe in love or see it as a virus (well a lot of its symptoms are very similar to carbon monoxide poisoning, dizzy, shortness of breath), everything that brings us together, as well as tears us apart, can only be reallignment. Personally, I see it as similar to stubbing your toe... You never see it coming and it hurts like all hell has been let loose. Or maybe im just doing it wrong :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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SleeplessVolcano

5 Years Ago

Your profile pic is making me dizzy -lol - sit still!
Lorry

5 Years Ago

Well, I overheard someone calling me two faced once and it gave me an idea :)
Recalibration of the tickers. :)
They have a mind of their own sometimes. I let my heart rule for a time. Should have listened to my head.
Great little senryu SV.

Posted 5 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

5 Years Ago

That's the hardest thing, right? Stopping that silly heart from beating a hole in the wall.....pity.. read more

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