Once upon a tweet ~ Senryu

Once upon a tweet ~ Senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

Beyond coffefe,

In the land of hamberders -

walls are just broken.

© 2019 SleeplessVolcano


Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
Read it and weep.
https://www.huffingtonpost.com/entry/donald-trump-hamburger-typo_us_5c3dd9b6e4b0922a21d89bf1

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many times my typos include misspelled words ... who cares ... the Huffington is who they are and will mock and ridicule our President as often as they can .. so the story becomes about misspelled words in a tweet ... I like the good natured humor in your senryu Sleepless ..its more than that because of the depth in the closing line ... walls not taken care of will crumble in time ... i have lived in more than one home in my life and because I enjoy my privacy and control over me small speck of yards ... I have straight away put up fences and or thick thorned bushes to achieve it. The push for border security includes more than a "wall" ... barriers work as deterrents and add to surveillance by our border patrols and drones ... all of it works together... Thanks for this subtly sharp political/spiritual senryu and a platform for discussions ;) its true for sure that in a much broader sense all things we "build" and all our "progress" will crumble and pass away ..what was that the prophet said so long ago?? ..oh yes "....Vanity of vanities, says the Preacher,
vanity of vanities! All is vanity.
3 What does man gain by all the toil
at which he toils under the sun?" Ecclesiastes 1:2-3 :) love and peace bro!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the comprehension comment my friend! I'm the first advocate that meaning is more importa.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

5 Years Ago

Sorry, the Bush article was a CNN one :)
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

he might have been ... the "parties" start almost instantly after elections to posture for the next .. read more

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